Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... Help?

After spending two late nights reading a good chunk of Gaiden, I had an odd dream: I woke up in Bishop's lab, strapped to a dissection table. In front of me was that chiche` glowing green sludge in an oddly-shaped cauldron. Bishop injected me with it, and that's all I remember. THe problem is, I don't have a freakin' name for it!!

Instead of just leaving it alone, I decided to expand on it, make it into a comic:

Bishop knocks two teenagers out on the street for the sake of an experiment he's conducting. The main character is a fourteen-year-old girl named Magenta, and Is the first one seen in the comic. The sight of the cauldron grosses her out, but then Bishop speaks up, scaring her. He's just a silhoette talking to her. They talk for a while.

Here's a small sample of it:
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Magenta's thoughts: Ugh, my...head.

(eye slowly opens, sees a blurry cauldron, eyes snap open, sees the whole cauldron with a glowing sludge inside it)

Magenta: Ew! What is IN that?!

Bishop: You should be more concerned about where you ARE, rather than what is inside that cauldron.

Magenta: Dude, I know I'm in a lab.

Bishop: And...you are strapped to a dissection table.

Magenta: A DISSECTION TABLE?!?!

Bishop: Ha ha. But don't worry, my teenage friend, I won't dissect you. I have my sights on a specific foursome.

Magenta: You're a Nuttybrain.

Bishop: What's your name?

Magenta: Magenta.

Bishop: Where were you going before you were knocked out?

Magenta: Walking home from school with--AVEN!!

Bishop: Ah, yes. The boy. (holds up beaker with a red liquid)

Magenta: WHAT DID YOU DO TO HIM?!

Bishop: Oh, I simply knocked him out cold as well. He is here.

Magenta: DID YOU DRAIN HIS BLOOD?!?

Bishop: (disturbingly calm) No, no, all his blood is in his body. This...is very special blood. It's from one of those specific foursome. (pours blood into cauldron, turning the concoction red)

Magenta: Ulp!
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Now, this is just a sample. Doing all this on an iPod Touch can really hurt your fingers.

I need help naming it. once I get un-grounded, I'll upload a pic.

(P.S.: Sorry about slacking on AWAU, it would kill me to write all that on the iPod.

'K guys. Sorry for double posting, but I forgot to add something.

Magenta, the main character, as you could probably tell, and her brother, Aven, gets turned into turtles by Bishop's stupid injection, with one big thing: every time they get mad, they slowly get the features of dragons. Bishop intentionally did this to see if they could kill off his four Turtle enemies.

Hrm... would "dragon rage" or "Draconic Spite" work?

Close, but, I really wasn't aiming to mention the dragon thing in the title, gives away too much. And besides, once they calm down, they revert back to turtles.

Well ok, so... BIship captures them and turns them into turtles, or rather hybred turtles because there's a mix of Dragon DNA within them. You don't want to hint that they can shift into dragons...

Bishop's intention is for them to befriend the turtles, and get the two angry somehow so they attack the turtles. Meaning they can't control this dragon-beserker rage, (at least not at first). I presume the entention is for the turtles to help the two either eraticate the dragon dna or gain control of it because it wouldn't be much fun if this was a story about enemies of the TMNT.

"Danger from within" would also be too obvious because the reader will expect them to be the danger.

"Inner rage" might work, but I don't know. It's late here and I"m depressed so my muse is a little off.

Ok, really, do you have a mind reader or something? 'Cuz you hit it spot-on! And the names are PERFECT!! Really, it's scary!! Dude, you rock!!

Thanks, writing is one of my hobbies, Greysight is actually a chracter I've been wanting to write a full fan fic about but I can't seem to bring myself to finish it.

I can't decide if I should do it fromher point of view and start from when she's young to current or from the turtles... she's not always on the turtles' side in all RPGs and in the story I have in mind they butt heads more than once...

I like 'Inner Rage' LOL

I do too!! Though when I described it to a friend, I said Rage from Within on accident, and it does sound pretty cool, though if anyone else wants to give some suggestians, I'd love to see 'em