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FallenAngel4000
Number of posts : 2160
Age : 25
Location : somewhere but nowhere i can easily lose myself but am i lost or just not found
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : ^~^
ALL OF 'DEM!!!!
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-11-02
| Subject: In Mistiee's head  Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:35 pm | |
| wait for the first chapter sorry!
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mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905
Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13
| | Subject: Re: In Mistiee's head Wed Jan 19, 2011 11:37 am | |
| For a first fanfic, I've got to say that this isn't bad. It's actually quite good. But I think you still should have developed the characters a bit more and that there's just too much happening in such a short time | |
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FallenAngel4000
Number of posts : 2160
Age : 25
Location : somewhere but nowhere i can easily lose myself but am i lost or just not found
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : ^~^
ALL OF 'DEM!!!!
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-11-02
| | Subject: Re: In Mistiee's head Wed Jan 19, 2011 7:56 pm | |
| Awesome thanks! i was thinking that but hearing it from you was great i'll work on it! i'm beginning to work on the second chapter so i'll take your advice on board thanks!
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Leo'sGirl
Number of posts : 1047
Age : 27
Location : Wonderland
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : Leo, obviously. But I love all of them <3
Shells : 0
Registration date : 2010-06-29
| | Subject: Re: In Mistiee's head Fri Jan 21, 2011 4:59 pm | |
| Wow this is really good! I do agree with Mcavedzo's comment (and this is just from a reader's perspective). But other than that, it's awesome! | |
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DyingDead
Number of posts : 3
Age : 25
Warning Level :
Shells : 0
Registration date : 2011-01-20
| | Subject: Re: In Mistiee's head Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:42 pm | |
| yes i do rather like this story but if i were to be honest i must say that i fell i don't know much about your characters and i wish i could i hope you feel i'm not being to harsh | |
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FallenAngel4000
Number of posts : 2160
Age : 25
Location : somewhere but nowhere i can easily lose myself but am i lost or just not found
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : ^~^
ALL OF 'DEM!!!!
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-11-02
| | Subject: Re: In Mistiee's head Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:41 am | |
| guys i would like to tell you that i have taken your advice and now i will begin again hopefully this time it will be better thank you all for your help and i hope to get to you soon with the new begining  i may ask for your advice while i am writing since i am still new to writing Fan Fictions and i know that MC and Leo's girl are both wonderful writers hope yoy don't mind and if i do ask for help i will give credit | |
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Leo'sGirl
Number of posts : 1047
Age : 27
Location : Wonderland
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : Leo, obviously. But I love all of them <3
Shells : 0
Registration date : 2010-06-29
| | Subject: Re: In Mistiee's head Sat Feb 19, 2011 10:20 am | |
| I know this is a little late in answering, but you can always PM me if you ever have any questions! Id be more than happy to help! | |
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FallenAngel4000
Number of posts : 2160
Age : 25
Location : somewhere but nowhere i can easily lose myself but am i lost or just not found
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : ^~^
ALL OF 'DEM!!!!
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-11-02
| | Subject: Re: In Mistiee's head Sun Apr 10, 2011 9:35 pm | |
| heya thanks but i can't seem to leo's girl is there anyother way i can send it to you wait what if i just post it up and then you can help me that way?
your call
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thelostkingdom
Number of posts : 3198
Age : 30
Location : behind you, booooo (I'm a ghost)... Barcelona(Spain)
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Favorite Turtle : Raphael
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-29
| | Subject: Re: In Mistiee's head Sat Apr 23, 2011 3:29 pm | |
| Hey! I want to read the chapter! Where you went to read it? | |
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FallenAngel4000
Number of posts : 2160
Age : 25
Location : somewhere but nowhere i can easily lose myself but am i lost or just not found
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : ^~^
ALL OF 'DEM!!!!
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-11-02
| | Subject: Re: In Mistiee's head Tue Apr 26, 2011 5:29 pm | |
| it will be posted up as soon as i finish it completely
not very long ^~^
i'm just sending it to Leo'sgirl | |
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