My homework for "Britannica"

I'm pretty bored, so I wanna show you my homework for Private School "Britannica"






The story opens with the conspicuous celebration of a normally secretive wizarding world. For many years, it had been terrorised by the evil wizard, Lord Voldemort. The previous night, on 31 October, Voldemort discovers the Potter family's hidden refuge, killing Lily and James Potter. However, when he attempts to murder their infant son, Harry, the Avada Kedavra killing curse he casts rebounds upon him. Voldemort's body is destroyed, but his spirit survives: he is neither dead nor alive. Meanwhile, the orphaned Harry is left with a distinctive lightning bolt-shaped scar on his forehead, the only physical sign of Voldemort's curse. Harry is the only known survivor of the killing curse, and Voldemort's mysterious defeat causes to wizard world call Harry - "The Boy Who Lived".

On November 1, Hagrid, a 'half-giant', delivers Harry to his only living relatives, the cruel and magic-phobic Dursleys, comprising Uncle Vernon, a bad-tempered uncle with hardly any neck; Aunt Petunia, a long-necked woman who appears to absolutely loathe Harry; and Dudley, their spoiled, overweight son. They attempt in vain to rid him of his magical powers, hide his magical heritage, and severely punish him after any strange occurrences.

However, as his eleventh birthday approaches, Harry has his first contact with the magical world when he receives letters from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, which are delivered by owls. However, his uncle intercepts the letters. On his birthday, Hagrid, Hogwarts' gamekeeper, appears and informs Harry that he is a wizard and has been invited to attend the school. Each book chronicles one year in Harry's life, which is mostly spent at Hogwarts. There he learns to use magic and brew potions.



Erm... I'm going to that school today at 19.30 (7.30 pm), so if you notice some mistake, tell me, OK?

Greets!

Hi Lazar,

ok, I have read it and tried to find some grammer mistakes
But all in all that was pretty good english!! :cheers:
You must be a very good student^^



The story opens with the conspicuous celebration of a normal secretive wizarding world. For many years, it has been terrorised by the evil wizard, Lord Voldemort. On the previous night, 31th of October, Voldemort discovers the Potter family's hidden refuge, killing Lily and James Potter. However, when he attempts to murder their infant son, Harry, the Avada Kedavra killing curse, he casts, rebounds upon him. Voldemort's body is destroyed, but his spirit survives: he is neither dead nor alive. Meanwhile, the orphaned Harry is left with a distinctive lightning bolt-shaped scar on his forehead, the only physical sign of Voldemort's curse. Harry is the only known survivor of the killing curse, and Voldemort's mysterious defeat causes the wizard-world to call Harry:"The Boy Who Lived".

On November 1, Hagrid, a 'half-giant', delivers Harry to his only living relatives, the cruel and magic-phobic Dursleys, comprising Uncle Vernon, a bad-tempered uncle with hardly a neck; Aunt Petunia, a long-necked woman who appears to absolutely loathe Harry; and Dudley, their spoiled, overweight son. They attempt to rid him of his magical powers in vein, hide his magical heritage, and punish him severely after any strange occurrences.

However, as his eleventh birthday approaches, Harry has his first contact with the magical world, when he receives letters from Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, which were delivered by owls. However, his uncle intercepts the letters. On his birthday, Hagrid, Hogwarts' gamekeeper, appears and informs Harry, that he is a wizard and has been invited to attend the school.
Each book chronicles one year in Harry's life, which is mostly spent at Hogwarts. There he learns to use magic and brew potions.



greetz

Argh!! No not Harry potter please!!

And why Bea? That's good choice for writing the review in my school, 'cause there are many things to tell. If you hate him (as and everything), you can just skip it...

no no it's only than i am not a big fan of that movie

many mistakes but I like it

Thanks ^^' Tomorrow I'll show you Harry Potter with teacher's correctied mistakes... We'll see was Aline right

my homeworks are more bad than yours
-look at this english exam-
http://www.2shared.com/file/2624550/e4303f8a/Top.html
Buono is a positive mark

Wow, I'm very curious about that HP-essay

And Bea: That was also a sweet essay! But I was suprised, that your teacher has used green marker to correct your mistakes :?:
My teachers were only allowed to use a red pen ^^'
greetz

well my teacher of english is a little crazy... O_o i know

ive never read it to long i readf to one chapter and got distracted by a shiny object :lol!: and sorry i cant help with your eng project lets oput it simply me and english is like oil and water i just write stores no grammer for me i say listen to ayro shea good


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