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PostSubject: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles   Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Icon_minitimeFri Apr 25, 2008 1:13 am

There are not names of the chapters and the title of the book until I finish the chapter/book. I don't have the specific mission how the book will go - it all depends of my current state.

Chapter One
~Leanrdo's strange act~
It is a warm evening in the NewYork City. The shiny moon casting light upon the town - it was beautiful. A lot of tourists were walking down at the streets of this town. All the clubs were opened, where young people were coming and meeting each other. Oh- look at it! Looks like one boy is going out with a girl. They met in club. It's not cold as usually - even older people can go out and enjoy. Some old ladies are in park, talking about Spanish TV series.

But the town isn't like this everywhere. In small streets, the gangs are haging out, drinking and robbing people. They are usually in alleys - hiding and waiting for somebody to rob. The police is too lazy to go and do something about it. As it's beautiful in big towns with a lot of people, it's also very scary to be alone in the street. Every time somebody can catch you. Even kill you.

Oh my God! It's happening right now. An old lady is going in the street. She is scared, but she's hoping that the gang will not catch her. She does't know they are just waiting for her.

"Hello, old lady", said one of the gang members, and got out of the shadows. The oldy lady was too scaried to act.
"You look like a very nice lady", said the other guy, jumping from the roof of the small garage. The woman screamed and felt to the gound.
"Oh...", said one of the gang members. "Don't worry. We won't do anything bad to you!"
"Yes...", said the fattest one. "We're just going to take your money"
"Hmm...", said one of them, while he was getting closer to the women. It was obvious that he was the leader of the gang. "If you stay calm and give me money, we won't hurt you. But if you make even a move and try to keep money..."

He didn't complete the sentence, and he pulled his knife out of his jacket. Easily, and scary, he touched his neck with the sharp knife, pointing at the poor women. She screamed.

Four more shadows were getting closer, easily. They were so quiet, that, even the women wouldn't see them, if there wasn't a moonlight. They looked scardy. Women could see only theirs siluetes. And suddenly -- punch! punch! bang! crash! tik-tok! pheew! -- and all the gang members were lying on ground, uncounsions. the women was not sure what did she see, but four strange guys left. she just stood up and ran away... she didn't know that the four guys were still looking at her from the rooftop of the bulding near.

"We saved somebody again", said one of them. Now, finally, when they were all on the top of the building, their faces and the whole body could be seen well. They all were in size of a human, totally green, but each in a bit different tone of green. They all were wearing a badanna of different color. The one that has just spoken was wearing a blue badanna. The other were wearing red, orange or a purple one.

Also, each of them had a different weapon. The one with blue mask had pair of katana. The second one, with purple mask, was wearing a bo staff on his back. The third, with red mask, had pair of sharp sais, while the last one, with orange mask, had a pair of nunchakus.

"If this continues like this, we will become Teenage Mutant Ninja Turltes Police!", shouted one with red mask.
"Be quite, Raphael!", said the one wih blue katana. "It has passed 5 years since we were ninjas. Now, with Karai as the president, it's not the same. There are spies all over the city, just waiting to see us! And even... kill us".
"Oh, come on, Leonardo!", said Raphael. "It's not so bad! At least we were training all those years! We are much better than we were. Why don't we use these few days when Karai is out of the USA and just kick somebody's ass!"
"Leo, Raph, ssh!!", said the one with the purple mask. He poined at the edge of the buliding. There was something strange, that isn't on the top of every building.
"A camera, Don?", Leo wispered.
"I think so. But, I don't think it saw us... Unless it heard us...", said the one with the purple mask. "Mikey", he turned head to the one with orange mask. "Give me my glasses. They are in the bag".
"Here you are, Don", wispered Mikey, giving them to Don carefully. Don took them on the head and looked throu them.
"Oh no! They have sound proccesor inside! And it's one of the stronger - "Karai680 - Z series". But, however... Give me few minutes... We are at least 9 meters away fromt he camera, and maximum 11 meters. In the worst case, when we are only 9 meter away, our foots are exatcly 9 meters away from the camera. But, our heads are a bit more than 9 meters. By using Pitagore's Theoreme, I can see that the destination of our heads to the camera is, counting that we are 1.65 meter tall... 9.34 meters. The maximum sound destination ever made is 8.3 meters"
"Oh, thanks God...", said Leo.
"But..."
"Huh?", said Mikey. "Why is there always BUT?"
"But, as Karain owns very good sound techonology, she could increase the soudn destination for 11 percent. So that is... 9.13 meters. So, this means we weren't heard. But, I'm afraid about our footsteps. We were wasling slowly. I don't think the sound cound be so loud to get to the sound detectioner. But, if we move only a bit, it could hear us. We need some small rock... Anything that is heavy to make a louder noise than our footsteps. But, don't make even one step. You mustn't move your legs at all"
"But... There's no stone...", said Leonardo.
"Hm... Damn it...", said Don. "All of you, give me your weapons. Don't you dare to flip them. I have a plan. I just hope we could reach at least 8.3 meters. If I don't get all the weapons in a line that's at least 8.3 meters long, than we can't hide our footsteps good enough. In the worst scenario, we will die".
"Oh no...", said Raph, scared.

For next few minutes, everyone was scared, looking at Don, while he was contstruating the weapons to reach as long as he could. He was think out loud.

"My bo staff will go first", he wispared. "If I put Raph's Sais next, they will kill about 0.1 meter... Leo's katanas are stronger - thew will kill only 0.03, I thinks. Next will be Mikey's nunchakus, and the lasts will be Raph's sais. That's... about 8.5 meters! It's very good"

"Fewh!", said Mikey.
"But...", started Don.
"What!? There's again 'but'?", Mikey almost screamed.
"But, we will lose our weapons. Don't worry, we will see with Master Splinter to give us new ones. I hope he has few more for us", said Don.
"Oh... OK", said Leo.

Don threw to weapons at the camera. They made a loud noise and the turtes used that to escape. When they got to the ground, Don said: "That's it. This time we've escapet them, but I don't think that Karai will be happy after this. The members of the foot-clan will come here and report this to Karai. I really don't think that she'll just say these are only weapons. She will make a better search for us, and next time increase the sound destinators much more - even about 34%. I'm afraid that soon she will rule the NewYork City totally".
"Yes, Don", said Leo. "You are totally right, but right now there is no time for talking. we have to go home. Who knows what will happen next? The Foots are might already the way here"
"Yes, you are right, Leo", said Don. "We have to go. It's not like before. Even that we have defeated the Shredder, his daughter is still here"
"Let's go", said Raph. They went to the nearest sewer open, and hiding in he shadows, they jumped in.

The sewer was gross. Everywhere were rats and trash. But this was totally normal for turtles - they didn't feel the stink of the sewer, it was their home. They were going straight ahead, only sometimes jumping to skip the holes that were all over the sewers. After few minutes of walking, they came to a bit cleaner place. But there was only a wall. Don came in from of it, and knocked on the few blocks. And... the wall opened! Yes, the wall opened. It was like a garage door.

"Master Splinter, we are home!", shouted Raph.
"Oh, my sons!", said somebody in the room slowly. "I have been worring about yo very much, my sons. Where have you been all this time? Was not it a deal to come here before the moonlight?"
"Yes, Master Splinter, but...", started Leo.
"We were in a danger. We had to tihnk of a good strtegry for the escape", finished Don.
"Oh, no...", said Master Splinter. "I told you this many times!", he shouted.
"We are really soory, father!", said Leo, almost scared.
"You are forbbiden to go out in next month!", he said.
"What?!", said Mikey and Raph both.
"I warned you, my sons", said the old rat. "I was telling oyu all the time that you can't avoid the trouble always"
"But, sensei!", said Leo, "we've avoided it! Did we came here alive?"
"Yes, you have, my sons, but...", said Master Splinter.
"But what?!", shouted Leo. Noboy has seen Leo this angry since the battle versus the Shredder.
"My son, calm down", said Master Splinter.
"No, I won't!", shouted Leo.
"Leonardo...", said Splinter.
"Shut up!!!", shouted Leo and ran into his room. Master Splinter just said "Ahh...", and went.
"I'm going to meditate, my sons..."
The other turtles didn't say anything.

"I haven't seen Leo so angry since we have fought the Shredder", said Don when Master Splinter got to his room.
"Let's go ot sleep. It's too late, however", said Mikey.
"No", said Raph.
"Huh?", asked Mikey and Don.
"Maybe we should train a bit before we go", said Raph.
"What?", asked Mikey. "But... why?"
"Because", said Raph, "it's not anymroe as it was. Master Splinter was right. They could see us. Who knows, would we survive than?"
"Hm... Yes, you are right, Raph", said Don.
"I'll bring the punching bags", said Mikey.

And after few minutes, Do, Mikey and Raph were training. Raph was punching and kicking the bag. He was trying to destroy it completely. Mikey was making incredible moves with his nunchakus, and Don was trying to stand on the bo staff while it was verticaly standing. As minutes passes, they were better and better. Raph almost destroied the bag, Mikey was jumping and swirling while doing moves with nunchakus. Don, who could fight while standing on the bo staff even didn't see the nunchakus, as he spinned them so fast. They were training so long... even they were tired, they didn't give up. In the morning, everyone could do whatever they want. After they've cleaned up the mess, they waited for Master Splinter and Leo to wake up. At about 6:00 am, Splinter woke up.

"Good morning, my sons. Prepare. Today we are going to train a bit", he said and went to the kitchen to prepare a breakfast. Don, Mikey and Raph were looking at each other with who-made-us-train-now looking on their faces. And than, Leo woke up.
"Hey!", said Raph to Leo.
"Hey...", replyed Leo.
"Good morning, my son", said Splinter. Don, Mikey and Raph were looking. They were waiting for Leo do something, but they didn't know what exactly will he do. Sometimes, he could just pass and don't say nothing, but sometimes, when he isn't very good that day, he might start to attack that person. Master Splinter was also thinking the same as Don, Mikey and Raph.
"Good morning, Sensei", said Leo. Master Splinter passed, heading to the table to eat. Leo did the same. It was quite. And than, Master Splinter started to speak.
"My sons", he said. "Today we will train. But, this time it will not be as earlier. This time, I don't want from you to puch bags or blow out the candle in the dark. This time, we will use the whole house as the training area. Everything is alowed - hiding, throwing stuff at me, usign shurikens, kunais. Everything. You have one task"
Everyone was thinking what would that be. Would Master Splinter want from them to defeat him, as usually? Will the only difference be that we will be allowed to use everything that we want?
"You task, my sons, is very simple to remember. And when you first head it, you will think that it's very simple to do. But it'll be very hard. So don't laugh or think that I'm joking with you. For the first time, you will have the real training. You will have to make me lay down", he finished.
"What!?", Don, Raph and Mikey shouted. Leo didn't say anything. He stood up and asked a very simple question, but for Master Splinter was very hard to answer to it.
"What is the meaning of that?", he asked. Master Splinter didn't answer it. He said, "Go!"

Raph jumped to Master Splinter imediatelly, but Master Splinter just used his small staff to puch Raph. Mikey also jumped on him, but Splinter made salto. Don stood on the bo staff as he was training last nighting, and jusmped to Master Splinter. Splinter turned again, but he didn't expect that Don could jump from the staff. Don almost kicked Master Splinter, but he moved and avoided the kick. Splinter evel less expected from Raph to be under him, waiting with sais to attack. But Splinter avoided even that. Thinking that under his feet is save, he stood. But he suddenly fell down. It was because of Mikey's nunchakus - they were laying on the graound, and than Mikey pulled them. Don jumped to Master Splinter, with his bo staff so that Splinter can't move.

"When on the earth did you three learned that?", asked Leo. Even Master Splinter didn't say a word, Mikey, Don and Raph knew that he had the same question. Mikey, Raph and Don looked at each other.

"We were training last night", said Don.
"That's very good my sons. I'm very pround of you", said Master Splinter.
"Thanks, Master Splinter", said Raph.
"Meh! Everyone can do something like THAT!", said Leo. "After all, the only thing you had was luck"
"My s--"
"You shut up!", shouted Leo and got to his room. Nor Master Splinter, nor Don, nor Mikey, nor Raph couldn't belive what have just happened. They've never seen Leonardo so angry before. Especially never to Master Splitner.


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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles   Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Icon_minitimeSat May 10, 2008 11:10 am

Nice! When would you make a second chapter?
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles   Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Icon_minitimeSun Jun 22, 2008 7:21 pm

more!This is awesome!!!! Mike Go Mikey its your b-day
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles   Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Icon_minitimeSun Aug 24, 2008 11:33 am

nice job its cool altough it took me preety long to read
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PostSubject: Re: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles   Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Icon_minitimeSun Aug 24, 2008 11:38 am

Oh holly ****! I don't write this fiction anymore XD Sorry...

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