Cold Heart comic

Cold Heart

I am currently writing a script for a drama/adventure TMNT comic based on the world war two style and the episode ‘Same as it never was’. The story happens in another earth dimension where aliens, mutants and humans are living together.

I will not explain the story here and now because I need to translate before.

Here are the characters designs
*The style of the four drawings are different because I got better between each of them lol

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Leonardo

Here is the character design for Leonardo. He is the most complicated character of the whole story. The formal nazi/Resistance outfit. For information on the story/comic, take a look at my journal.

Faction :
Nazi / Resistance

Current Status :
Colonel of the south

New Status :
Chief of the first pro-resistance bataillon

Age :
25 years old

Weapons :
Double hidden swords

Combat style :
ninjutsu / stealth

Leonardo was the colonel of the South SS group. He indented to follow his father steps : Serve his country and protect its citizens. He realized too late that he has been manipulated just like the whole nation by the ultimate leader; it was no war... but a genocide.

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Is Leonardo a bad guy in the story?
Yes. He killed many, many innocent people. And he is certainly not proud of it. He would never be able to redeem himself, but he will give his life to stop this blood shed.

What's the weird things onto his wrists?
His weapons; double hidden swords. Totally invisible under his coat, perfect for a surprise attack.
(for the one who know about Assassin's creed or Hell boy, it's exactly the same principle.)

That's a big scar!
Yeah... how it happened is a secret until the comic release.


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Raphael


Here is the character design for Raphael. The formal outfit.
For information on the story/comic, take a look at my journal.

Faction :
Nazi

Current Status :
Second soldier of the South

New Status :
Colonel of the South

Age :
25 years old

Weapons :
Bazooka and two machetes

Combat style :
Military
(Ruthless and effective, aim for the bones and the neck)

Raphael holds a huge grudge against the enemy for killing his father. He is very clever and ruthless. If he wants something, he,ll do everything in his power to gain it.
He does like children, pets… and grandmothers.
The anger he holds against himself is launched on the others around him.
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Is Raphael a bad guy in the story?
He follows the bad guys’ orders. And the orders are to kill everyone who is not an ally (innocents included). So yes he is a bad guy.
Still, for someone who is from his nation/country, he'll give his life with no hesitation to save that person.

Where are his two sai?
I decided to exchange them with two machetes because in this story, Raphael is not a ninja, but a SS colonel.

Raph with a tie?!
He hates ties. But when he is in public, since he is a model for every soldiers and citizens, he makes an effort.


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Donatello

Faction:
Army (controlled by the Nazi faction)

Current Status:
Pilot

Age:
25 years old

Weapons:
Diver inventions

Combat style:
Airplane, high-tech and guns

Donatello is a very comfortable person. He is always smiling, never gets angry and is very loyal. He is clever, but can sometimes be very stupid before obvious things. His passion is to create things and try them afterward.
He is one of the best pilots/air fighter of the nation… but surely not the most respected.
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Questions

-Is Donatello a bad guy?-
No. He is a soldier. His goal is to protect the people around him and his country. He will never hurt someone who does not wear a military uniform.

-Hey! That`s April in the picture! Are they lovers in that story?-
Good question. You’ll have to read the comic to know the answer.

-Donatello seems very slender.-
He is. Don is the smallest turtle in height and muscle mass. Since he is a pilot and does not fight hand to hand, he doe not need to be physically strong, unlike his other brothers. The women same age don`t see him as a love interest because of his teenage silhouette.

-What's the tattoo about?-
It's the emblem of his plane. How he gets the tattoo? That's another story XD

-I don't see any high-tech weapons in there?-
True, I will draw them another time.

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Mikey

Here is the character design for Michelangelo. And he is the most muscular of the turtles. The training/teaching outfit. For information on the story/comic, take a look at my journal.

Faction :
None / Neutral

Current Status :
ex-fighter / Boxing Teacher

Age :
25 years old

Weapons :
Fists and everything he can grab

Combat style :
Western / Kickboxing

Mikey is very competitive and likes to win. He can sometimes pressure his students in a wrong way because of this. Still, while not at work, he is a very lovely character and, even if he is very lazy, likes to help the people around him.
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Is Mikey a bad guy in the story?
No.

Mikey with glasses?
Yes. Always drawing him with spectacles in human form. (things I do not post because it's too crappy).

Wow. Just. Wow. This is amazing! I can't wait to see the comic.

Ooh i have to see the comic you got me on my tipy toes here

I saw those on DA first! Lalunatique, you seriously have a talent!

I'm disappointed that Leo and Raph have chosen the dark side, but I LOVE the drawings and the concept 8D

Thanks everybody for your support


Xile: ''I'm disappointed that Leo and Raph have chosen the dark side''
No one is totally on the dark side, like no one is totally on the light side. (only in old-school superhero movies)
The word ''bad'' in this story is defined by my own preconceptions of the good and the bad XD. Maybe the point of view about ''good and evil'' in this story will be different for you or for my friends than me.

''Have chosen the dark side.''
Well, they did not chose their side. They were raised in an extremist country.
Example: WW2, the Jews were seen in Germany like rats... or a disease. Adults and parents explained this ''philosophy'' to their children, and children grew up thinking Jews were rats. It is the same principle with Leo and Raph. They only wish to follow their models, their culture.
You will say: ''Then it's not their fault if they are bad!''
True, and yet, not true XD. Let's wait for the story.

You can fully be disappointed about their ''roles'' XD. And you will probably be mad at me often during the story development.

XP ah come on it's your opinion and you're only showing off your creativity LOL I'll probably be REAL MAD O_O (jk) XP

This is prob a really stupid question and will show how much of a weak point history is to me, but isn't someone who's with the resistance against the Nazis?

Yes, that is exact.
The resistance is against the Nazis.
Leonardo switch side

Lalunatique you know you've got more goodies to show, lez see em O_O

Here is Leo's main team composed of Karai and Usagi.

Karai switched of faction just like Leo did. She is an incredible long range shooter.

Usagi is the strongest melee figther of the whole Resistance group. He is the one who will teach Leo the art of Kendo: "Way of the Sword".

It dosen't matter what kind of place you put usagi is always adorable no offence lalunatique
but its soo funny and i have to say you have got such talent it amazing i could only draw like that in my dreams this comic sounds amazing i can't wait but one thing why do they call it a comic if its not always funny but i'm probebly just confused don't listen to me

I really cna't wait to see this! It looks so good!

I agree! I can't wait for this!!! I love the way you draw! Major jealousy over here! And katanagirl, that's actually a really good question! Five bucks says it's cause comics used to be just the strips in newspapers and then they started selling books of them, which probably became more serious over time. I'm totally guessing here though.