TMNT stories

Hey guys! Well, I have read very cool tmnt-stories from the net, and I thought that maybe you all want to sahre them (if you have read any), so send all fun/exciting stories here (please tell me if this topic is already, you see, my bad, bad memory...-_-)

Leo day of

Is just a normal day in the lair, just like every other day. Donnie on
his computer (o my god a new version of linux is just out, I have to
download it) mikey on the TV (I am boring, and there’s nothing on tv,
let’s se a movie, ok I have ghost rider, fantastic four) raph on his
punching bag (“punch” “punch” “punch” I hate you mikey, “punch” “punch”
“punch”, “kick” “bite”) and my meditating like always.


That day in the morning, master splinter came near me and put his hands on my shoulders and said

S: my son how about you take the day off, you are always training and meditating
L: but master splinter
S: no need to worry, even a great master take a day of
L: yes master, but why are you asking my that?
S: my son you always train and no rest, the mind need to rest, for all of the hard work you do
L: ok master splinter as you wish
S: is not a order is a favor

Minute later in Leonardo’s room

L: “ok” I have never taken a day of, SO what can I do

1 hour later

L: Ok I don’t know what to do think, think

10 minute later

I will ask the others

L: hi Donnie what are you doing
D: am downloading a new version of linux, is way cool, and have the
beryl system “blah” “blah” “blah” “blah” “blah” “blah” “blah” “blah”

L: ok, ok I get it in English now please.
D: sorry is an OS with cool stuff, and the fact is that “blah” “blah” “blah” “blah” “blah” “blah” “blah”
L:”I will see what mikey is doing”

-what up mikey, what you doing

M: what do you want Leo
L: just want to know what you are watching
M: am watching comedy central, you can sit if you want you will enjoy this

8 minute later

Mikey laugh so hard then

L: ZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzz “snore” ZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzz, “BOOM” I will take responsibility for my brother master
M: what was that Leo, don’t tell me you fall sleep
L: sorry mikey, I think so
M: are you nuts with this show who in this earth can fall sleep
L: I think I do, sorry mikey I will se what’s raph doing
L: hi raph what…
R: I know that you want to know what am doing
L: how do you know?
R: Donnie still talking

(D: ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah”)

L: ok, so what exactly you do on you free time
R: I pretend that this bag is mikey
M: heard ya
R: and then I think all the stuff that mikey has done to my, and I let it go out, and release all my rage, come on you can do it
L: I cant do that raph
R why not splinter jr
L: because I don’t have any thing on you guys, or the above world, so what can I do?
R: ok, try to think about, Mmm, ok, remember bad stuff that happen to you here that you never tell us (~edit~)
L: like what
R: don’t know just punch it

Mmmmmmmm 10 minute later

R: just punch the *....*bag OK (~edit~)
L: ok, ok, jees, let see, this was the last Christmas for not let my have some turkey

“PUNCH”

R: good, keep it up, that how I keep my cool
L: yea right, ok, this is for when mikey put his foot in front of me and I fall down and almost break my noose.

“PUNCH” ONE hour later

R: WOW WOW WOW WOW, stop it NOW, man you really got some issues there, really big ones. So what’s next splinter jr.
L: I will… go … to .. my room to meditate
R: and I thought that I was the one with the issues here

And the day just like every other day has finish, like always,
Donnie with his computer, mikey in the TV, and raph in the punching bag

D: ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” ”blah” huh, Leo, Leo?, weird he was next to me right

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For you know, I edited some parts because of the language...

o_0 I didn't understand a thing, to be honest...

Am I stupid or this "story" really have no sense? :p

:lol!: X-Leo, you are a cool story writer!!!! That would be fine to make with MicheytheHero dollies!! http://tmnt-forum.com/all-everything-f19/tmnt-aktion-figurs-t166.htm

Dem, what is the matter with ya, that is darned cool!!

I don't see what's cool in that nonsense, Raph95 :p

Raph95 wrote:

:lol!: X-Leo, you are a cool story writer!!!! That would be fine to make with MicheytheHero dollies!! http://tmnt-forum.com/all-everything-f19/tmnt-aktion-figurs-t166.htm

Dem, what is the matter with ya, that is darned cool!!

Ooohh, sorrysorrysorrysorry!! :pale: I'm sorry I didn't wrote that! :affraid: *claps on the forehead and hides* Ugh, I'm terrible sorry, I forget to tell you guys that I didn't wrote that, I'm sooo sorry! :oops: :oops: But I can bring here some more, if you just want?

Raph95 wrote:

:lol!: X-Leo, you are a cool story writer!!!! That would be fine to make with MicheytheHero dollies!! http://tmnt-forum.com/all-everything-f19/tmnt-aktion-figurs-t166.htm

Dem, what is the matter with ya, that is darned cool!!

But hey, yeah, that is awesome idea! You guys should make it! :cheers:

I understood that you didn't wrote this, X-Leo :p

And to make what? Maybe I am a writer, but I can write only on my own language - on russian...

Nonsense? Try reading again. SEe, what happens when Leo gets a day off? He don'ty know what to do, and he goes to Donnie, he is comutering, Mikey is watching TV (leo don't like comedies, he fel asleep), Raph is punching. And XLeo told that is soooo funny way!!!!

Michey the Hero, we a4re waiting for your dollies

Raph95
I do not see any sense in that story. For me - this is just some stupid kind of a comedy. This is my honest opinion ;p

Wanna more wanna more wanna more

BTW: Passed the test, 17/20 points

Raph95 wrote:

Wanna more wanna more wanna more

BTW: Passed the test, 17/20 points

Ok, I'll look for more! Hey, that's great! Congratulations! :cheers:

Bargain
"Awww! C'mon, Leo!"
"Mikey, go away."
"But I need--"
"Mikey, I said no."Michelangelo jiggled from one foot to the other, absently wringing his hands.
"I'll give you my first editions 'Silver Sentry' comic! It's worth several hundred dollars!''
"What would I do with a first edition comic that I can't sell?"
"April could sell it for you! C'mon, whadda ya say?"
"I say 'NO', Mikey."Mikey paced back and forth in front of his brother. Then his face lit up.
"I know! I'll clean your room for a month!"
"Considering that my room is the neatest one here next to Master Splinter's, that hardly seems like much of a bargain."Mikey bit his lip, worry creasing his brow into almost permanent frown wrinkles.
"I'll do your chores-- for-- three months! AND I'll take your turn scrubbing the toilet for, um, six months!"Leo looked thoughtful.
"Keep talking."
"Eeep!" Mikey inadvertantly squeeked, looking over his shoulder. A sound was coming from far
away-- a sound of something that was unidentifiable at the moment, but growing steadily.
"And I'll cook you your favorite meal once a week!"
"And?"
"And? And? And... SERVE it to you personally! I don't even do that for Splinter!"
"Hmmmm... I don't know..."
"LEO! PLEASE! Three months of your chores, six months of scrubbing the toilet in your stead, once a week specially cooked meals served by yours truly--
""Wearing a maid's apron and little hat," Leo added.
"Wearing a-- wha?" his voice went up several notches.The sound was increasing-- getting closer and closer-- whatever was in the tunnels, it was about to enter their new, vast home. Sweat stood out on Mikey's face, and he began to shake physically.
"Bro, that is so harsh," he hesitated.
"Well, in that case--" Leo shrugged, about to close his bedroom door-- but Mikey stopped him.
"Agreed! I'll get April to get me something. ANYTHING!"
"Oh, and you have to give me your 'Black Eyed Peas' CD-- I'm tired of your playing that one song at all hours," Leo, arms crossed, insisted.
"But I just GOT the CD! I haven't had a chance to hear the rest of it!"
"Because all you keep playing is 'My Humps'."This was too much-- this was asking too much of the desperate turtle-- this was--
"WHERE IS HE?"
"How long?" Mikey asked.
"A month."
"Deal!"
"Deal. Go inside."Mikey disappeared into Leo's room, and Leo closed the door.Raph, breathing fire and trailing anger in his wake, was suddenly upon him.
"Where IS he? WHERE is MIKEY? I'm gonna so KILL HIM!"
"Calm down, Raph," Leo soothed, placing a hand on his brother that was immediately knocked away.
"LEO! You CAN'T protect him, NOT this time! Do you know what he did? Do you?" Raph pleaded, torn between his all-consuming anger at his youngest brother and his need to convince his oldest that this must be done!
"I'm sorry, Raph, but I can't let you touch him," Leo said sympathetically.
"But LOOK!"And Raph held out his motorcycle helmet-- artistically decorated with pretty ponies, rainbows, and hearts.
"And that's just the helmet!" he fumed.
"You should see my BIKE! WHERE is HE? Is he hidin' in your room? COME OUTTA THERE, YA COWARD! I'LL KICK YOUR--"
"He's not there, Raph," Leo replied.
"He's not even in the lair. And I'm not going to tell you where he is until you've calmed down."
"I'm NEVER gonna calm down! I'll kill him!"
"Come on, Raph," Leo said, trying not to smile.
"Go and calm down."
"HOW?"Leo thought about it. A ghost of a smile crossed his lips.
"How about taking a ride on your bike? That usually calms you down..."
Leo barely dodged the blow, but dodge it he did. Then Raph stormed off through the Lair, bellowing Mikey's name at the top of his voice.
"Remember, Mikey-- all my chores for three months, six months of toilet duty, my favorite meal every week-- in the cute outfit-- and the CD," Leo said, as Raph continued on his quest to kill his brother.
"Oh, and if I were you, I wouldn't come out of there for a bit."
"Ummm... do I REALLY gotta give up the CD?" came the muffled whine.Leo considered.
"No," he replied. Then "Hey, Raph!"
"OKAYOKAYOKAY!" Mikey surrendered.
"Jeeze, talk about brotherly love."
"Oh, and today is my day to scrub the toilet-- once Raph leaves the lair, get busy."
"Awwww..."

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I didn't wrote that. But I could look for something..darker next time, what do you say?

Gief darker :p

well if your looking for more stories there are some on quizilla

Hey, cool! But still, your one is better, really!

Hold on.
Mike couldn’t stop his brother from shaking, and morbid fascination caused him to wonder how the terrifying shudders were possible considering the position his brother was in.
The missile from Stockman’s robotic machine had made a mess of the warehouse and it was no surprise, as the building started to shake, that Leo had barked out orders to run. It started to crash down around them and Mike had seen Raph and Don on the other side of the
room before they were separated by debris, he felt hands shove him to the side and twisted around. He watched in horror as Leo tumbled backwards and the steel girder and brick fell on top of him, the sounds of the building crumbling were silenced as the sickening crack of his brother’s shell met his ears. He scrambled on hands and knees towards his downed elder brother, his
heart pumping wildly in fear. Leo’s lower body was pinned, his left arm trapped as brick covered his shoulder, Mike frantically pulled away as much as he could but soon found that he couldn’t free Leo of any more of the debris. It was simply too heavy.He cradled his brother’s head and tenderly tapped his cheek; Leo’s breathing signalling that he was still alive… barely.“Leo?” his voice trembled and he silently cursed himself for showing his fear, he had to reassure him that everything would be okay, he needed to be strong.Leo’s eyes fluttered open, his expression riddled with pain and confusion. He tried to glance around but found that he could only look up. He didn’t want to move, it hurt too much.
“Everything’s going to be okay, Leo. Raph and Don are probably looking for us right now.” Mike tried again to pull at the heavier brick and steel, his growl of frustration turned into a scream as he heaved with all the
strength he had.Leo’s head shook slowly,
“You can’t lift it,” he breathed.
“I have to try,” Mike responded,
“I’ve got to do something! I can’t just leave you here like this!”
“Mike-”
“No!” he cried,
“Don’t give up, Leo. Please just hold on.”
“I can’t.” Leo’s shudders continued; his breath became ragged as he squinted his eyes shut against the pain.Mike abandoned his futile efforts and returned to his brother’s side, his head snapped to and fro as he searched for anything that could help them.
“Raph! Don!”
“I don’t… don’t think they can… can hear you.” Leo rasped.Mike stared wide-eyed at his shaking brother, he knew that he had accepted
his fate but Mike wasn’t prepared to let him go.
“Go… find them. They… they might be hurt too.”Mike shook his head,
“No, I’m not leaving you here. I don’t want you to fall asleep if I go.”
Leo didn’t respond. Mike moved in close so that his brother could see his face, he rested his hand on Leo’s head,
“They’ll be here soon, you know they’ll be looking for us. You have to try and stay awake, I know you’re tired but you’ve got to.”
Leo’s eyes opened to look up at his baby brother, his grimace tore through Mike’s heart.
“The pain… it’s overwhelming… I feel like I’ve been broken in two.”
Mike nodded sadly,
“It’s your shell, I think it’s cracked but I don’t know how bad it is.”
“Oh,” he replied,
“that explains it.”
“Try not to think about it, I know that sounds stupid but you’ve got to think about something else.”
He gently stroked his thumb over his brother’s creased brow in an attempt to ease his pain somehow. Leo groaned and tried to move but a shooting pain across his back stopped him.
“Shh, easy bro, just rest.”
“I… Mike, I’m sorry.”
Mike tilted his head in confusion,
“What do you have to be sorry for?”
Leo ran his tongue over his dry lips,
“for getting us into this… for not moving… fast enough.”
Mike allowed a small laugh to escape,
“Leo, you’re always taking the blame for things. Even now you still think it’s your fault.”
Leo gulped with some effort,
“This time I’m… I’m allowed.”
Mike’s laugh died quickly,
“No, you’re not. You’re buried under all this because I wasn’t fast enough.”
Silence.
“Leo?”
Mike’s heart began to race furiously; he shook his brother’s shoulder as he suddenly feared the worst.Leo coughed harshly, his body wracked with pain. He breathed in sharply and twisted as much as he could to try and stop the hurt, it really was unbearable. Mike sighed with relief at Leo’s movements but quickly recovered and tried to soothe his brother.He glanced up to the window that was halfway across the room, he contemplated going out of the window in search of his remaining brothers convincing himself that he’d only be five minutes. Could he leave
Leo that long?
“Leo, I need you to do something for me. I want you to keep talking whilst I go to that window and see if I can see Raph and Don, can you do
that?”
Leo gave something resembling a nod and Mike patted his shoulder,
“Good. Start talking, I won’t be a minute.”
“You want… want me to tell a… story?”
Mike smiled,
“Sure.”
The silence in the room made it easy for him to hear Leo talking,
“When… when we were young, Raph… got lost in the sewer tunnels. Sensei… he was out scav… scavenging for food, you and… Donnie were
asleep. I went looking… looking for him, he hurt his ankle… when he fell.”
Mike stretched out of the window, he scanned the area but couldn’t see any sign of his brothers, he sighed dejectedly.
“He shouldn’t have gone out… Sensei… Sensei wasn’t happy… when he found out.”
“I remember seeing Raph with his ankle bandaged when I woke up that morning.”
Mike responded, showing Leo that he was listening.Leo nodded slightly even though Mike wasn’t near him to see it,
“When I found him, he… he was crying, but don’t… don’t tell him I… told you. You know… how he gets about that.”
“Your secret’s safe with me, bro.”
Leo smiled,
“He… he was so happy to… to see me.”
Mike frowned,
“Wait. I remember Splinter being mad at you, why?”
Leo grimaced as pain hit him again,
“I… I told Splinter that I made… made Raph go with me into… the tunnels.”
“You covered for him.”
Mike stated, he wasn’t surprised.
“Raph… was hurt, I didn’t want… want him to get punished for going out… as well.” Leo replied.
Mike moved away from the window and headed back to Leo,
“Why do you always have to stick up for us?”
Leo smiled as best he could,
“Because… you’re my baby brothers, I’d… I’d do anything for you.
”Mike returned the smile,
“Then I want you to do something for me now, and that’s to stay with me. Don’t leave me alone here.”
He tenderly stroked his brother’s face.
“I’m trying… I won’t leave… you alone.”
Leo reached his free arm up and gripped Mike’s hand. Mike became frightened of Leo’s weakened hold.
“Mike!”
Mike looked up, relief washing over his face at the sound of Raph’s voice,
“Over here!”
He turned back down to Leo with a warm smile on his face,
“See? I told you they’d find us. Everything’s going to be okay now.”
“Hmm.”
Leo’s eyes drifted shut, his breathing becoming slow and quiet.Raph slid to a stop by Mike’s side; his eyes widened at the sight before
him,
“Holy sh**.(~edit~)
”Mike cradled Leo’s head in his lap,
“Raph, where’s Don?”
“Right here.” Don replied, he too stopped when he saw Leo.
“Oh God.”
“We have to get this stuff off of him, he’s hurt bad.”
Mike commanded, he pushed at his brothers to move them into action.Raphael and Donatello heaved at the debris covering their brother, Leo cried out in pain when they moved the steel girder from his chest and Raph stepped back to allow Donatello to check his injuries.
“Give me your belts!” he shouted as he threw his arm back, palm out.
“What’s wrong?” Raph asked as he pulled the belt from around his waist and handed it to his kneeling brother.
“His carapace is cracked in half, I need to secure it before we can move him otherwise it’ll kill him.”
He pulled his own belt from his waist and carefully tied it around Leo’s chest and stomach, Mike ripped his away and threw it towards Raph, never once taking his gaze from Leo.Leo opened his eyes; his hazy and glass-eyed look sent a shiver through Mike’s body.
“You’re… not alone… now”
Mike’s eyes widened,
“No! Leo, no don’t! Hold on! Please hold on!”
Leo smiled, he reached up and gently touched the side of Mike’s face, his breath slowed and steadied before his eyes drifted shut.Tears
streamed from Mike’s eyes, he rocked back and forth on his knees, his arms cradling his brother.
“Please… hold on.”

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Seriously, I was crying when I first read this... But this isn't the 'darkest' story I've found, but I'll look for more...

Raph95 wrote:

Hey, cool! But still, your one is better, really!

Hey, sorry Raph, I don't know if you notised those earlier messages, but (sorry) I didn't wrote that first one... :oops: :oops: And I can't imagine myself about writing happy story like that one (not enough imagination!-_-)! I like more writing sad, painful stories..

And now, I liked this 'darker' story, X-Leo =)

Poor Leo...

The Demonic Kitten wrote:

And now, I liked this 'darker' story, X-Leo =)

Poor Leo...

That's good! But..yeah... :sad:

X-Leo
=( Daaaamn, I'm too sentimental for such stories -.-
But I still like 'em! ;p

I won't read this today :lol!: Could you put a bit longer one, please

The Demonic Kitten wrote:

X-Leo
=( Daaaamn, I'm too sentimental for such stories -.-
But I still like 'em! ;p

Yeah me too, once I found some very sad stories, and I read couple, but then I stopped cause I was crying all the time and they gave me a headache...-_- But I just can't stop reading them!

Raph95 wrote:

I won't read this today :lol!: Could you put a bit longer one, please

Ah, ok! Later then, huh?

wow all i can say :sad: