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mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905
Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Life and Death  Fri Jul 23, 2010 6:09 am | |
| I dunno...I wrote this while I was watching a ballet show because I was bored. I know it doesn´t make sense but I think it´s pretty. What´s your opinion?
When you die, your life... flashes,
and you disintegrate,
radiating energy.
When a thing turns into its opposite,
when love becomes hate,
there are always sparks.
But when life turns into death,
it's explosive.
There are streaks of light,
magical, and electrifying.
Everyone senses something,
some energy,
some spirit,
some sort of illumination,
But I see it.
I've seen bodies shining like stars.
Some say there's no soul,
no afterlife,
that life and death is the straightest line on the compass,
and nothing more.
I say believe what you want,
because no matter what you do,
cut everything up,
burn it all down,
you're in the path of something beyond your control. | |
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thelostkingdom
Number of posts : 3198
Age : 30
Location : behind you, booooo (I'm a ghost)... Barcelona(Spain)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : Raphael
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-29
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Jul 23, 2010 7:53 am | |
| Nice! I love this! You're a genious I said ever! And you want to say that no?
Sorry but you're wrong | |
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mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905
Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:06 am | |
| Thank you so much! And yes, you´re right, I was going to say that. | |
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thelostkingdom
Number of posts : 3198
Age : 30
Location : behind you, booooo (I'm a ghost)... Barcelona(Spain)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : Raphael
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-29
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:49 am | |
| You're too weird!!! xDD
seriously it's a nice work | |
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mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905
Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:18 pm | |
| Yes I am! and no it´s not! | |
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thelostkingdom
Number of posts : 3198
Age : 30
Location : behind you, booooo (I'm a ghost)... Barcelona(Spain)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : Raphael
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-29
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:31 pm | |
| I ban you cause you said this!
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mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905
Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:42 pm | |
| This is not the banning game! And I can say whatever I want! | |
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thelostkingdom
Number of posts : 3198
Age : 30
Location : behind you, booooo (I'm a ghost)... Barcelona(Spain)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : Raphael
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-29
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:37 pm | |
| No you can't!  | |
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mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905
Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:38 pm | |
| Why not? I´m in a free country! | |
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thelostkingdom
Number of posts : 3198
Age : 30
Location : behind you, booooo (I'm a ghost)... Barcelona(Spain)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : Raphael
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-29
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:43 pm | |
| But you're lying cause I love it! | |
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mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905
Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:44 pm | |
| Really? Why? This text´s terrible. I don´t know how to write about life and death.... | |
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katanagirl
Number of posts : 290
Age : 29
Location : aussie aussie oi oi
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : Monet my pet turtle =)
Shells : 0
Registration date : 2010-09-30
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Oct 15, 2010 3:50 am | |
|  Wow you are fantastic i love this omgosh omgosh i love it please write more or watch more ballet to get bored lol sorry if that made no sense and by the way this is more than pretty it's beautiful (i'm Katanagirls sis) | |
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mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905
Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Oct 15, 2010 8:16 am | |
| Thanks katana girl´s sis! I really apreciate your opinion! | |
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katanagirl
Number of posts : 290
Age : 29
Location : aussie aussie oi oi
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : Monet my pet turtle =)
Shells : 0
Registration date : 2010-09-30
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:21 am | |
| - katanagirl wrote:
- Wow you are fantastic
i love this
omgosh omgosh i love it
please write more or watch more ballet to get bored lol sorry if that made no sense
and by the way this is more than pretty it's beautiful
(i'm Katanagirls sis) wow your right this has to be the best thing i've read and i've a lot of books and stories do you like to write? | |
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mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905
Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Thu Oct 21, 2010 11:03 am | |
| Geez, wow. katanagirl, that is one of the nicest things that anyone has ever told me. Thanks a lot! Well...I haven´t written anything for a while but I have one or two fanfics on fanfiction.net if you wanna check them out. My username there is mcazevedo1996. | |
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katanagirl
Number of posts : 290
Age : 29
Location : aussie aussie oi oi
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : Monet my pet turtle =)
Shells : 0
Registration date : 2010-09-30
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Oct 22, 2010 4:56 am | |
| Sorry i tried going on but it didn't work do you have a link or something
i really want to see your masterpieces are you going to write again soon? | |
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mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905
Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13
| | Subject: Re: Life and Death Fri Oct 22, 2010 10:53 am | |
| Yeah, I have a link. It´s www.fanfiction.net/~mcazevedo And I don´t know if you should call them master pieces. It´s just fanfics.  And no, I seriously don´t know when or if I´ll write something more. Now I´m more dedicated to painting. | |
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