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thelostkingdom

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Age : 30
Location : behind you, booooo (I'm a ghost)... Barcelona(Spain)
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Favorite Turtle : Raphael
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Registration date : 2010-01-29

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PostSubject: This is my love story   This is my love story Icon_minitimeWed Feb 24, 2010 7:47 am

This is my new text, I write in spanish but I translate in english:
This is my love story.
Since it was only a child, already looking for someone to imagine new worlds, far from mine, whose dictionary does not contain the word "mourn".
I wanted to see a lake whose fish from starving, and that only we can get them.
When I was little, I used to imagine wars where no one come out hurt, and the only one who was wounded not mastered the language well. Where every night, people Let them consider nThe stars and moon, and that at death were reunited with the person he loved.
It was very different from a utopia, something hard to describe, something only we can both understand.
Since I was a child, you wanted, and never stopped you, but ironically showed up when I needed you most.
Just your sympathy, pity I ran out to to mourn, no problems they discard.
My family will never know how much I love you, no one will guess how I remember you.
Verte, it gives me such encouragement that even my favorite song, not my favorite film can reproduce.
Your questions, your words make me close my eyes gently.
As a child I hoped to find a princess locked in a huge tower, and that the rescue, falls in love with me.
All that dream has been distorted into something that makes me happy, this is my love story is not typical, but it's guts.
When I was small I used to accept that my dreams were just that, that my love would never come
Follow me tonight, make me feel real, as much as my love, make me feel what this child waited so incredulous.
Show me all your secrets as terrible they may seem.
As a child she closed her eyes gently as possible to draw my love, hoping someone matured to understand what I want for my love story.
We both entered our world, and have flourished my desires, and almost forgotten.
As a child I always dreamed of a world where we can meet again at death, so always be together.
This is my love story
Though not the most typical.


And this is an espanish version:
Esta es mi historia de amor.
Desde que solo era un niño, que ya buscaba a alguien para imaginarme nuevos mundos, lejanos al mío, cuyo diccionario no conteniese la palabra "llorar".
Quería ver un lago cuyos peces no muriesen de hambre, y que solo podamos entrar los dos.
Cuando yo era pequeño, solía imaginar guerras donde nadie saliese lastimado, y el único herido era quien no dominaba bien el idioma. Donde todas las noches, los ciudadanos mirasen ñlas estrellas y la luna, y que al morir se reencontrasen con la persona que amaba.
Era algo muy distinto a una utopía, algo difícil de describir, algo que solo los dos podemos entender.
Desde que era un niño, que te buscaba, y nunca dejé de buscarte, pero irónicamente apareciste cuando más te necesité.
Simplemente con tu simpatía, me quedé sin pena a la que llorar, sin problemas a los que deshechar.
Mi familia nunca va a saber cuanto te quiero, nadie va a adivinar como te recuerdo.
Verte, me produce tal estímulo, que ni mi canción favorita, ni mi película predilecta pueden reproducir.
Tus preguntas, todas tus palabras, me hacen cerrar los ojos con dulzura.
De pequeño esperaba encontrar una princesa encerrada en una enorme torre, y que al rescatarla, se enamorase perdidamente de mi.
Todo ese sueño ha sido deformado en algo que me hace más feliz, esta es mi historia de amor, no es la típica, pero es reañ.
Cuando era pequeño solía aceptar que mis sueños no eran más que eso, que mi história de amor nunca llegaría
Sigue conmigo esta noche, hazme sentir real, tanto como mi história de amor, hazme sentir lo que tanto esperó este niño incrédulo.
Muéstrame todos tus secretos por muy terribles que parezcan.
De pequeño cerraba los ojos con dulzura al dibujar mi posible amor, esperando que alguien madurase tanto para entender lo que quiero para mi historia de amor.
Los dos hemos entrado en nuestro mundo, y hemos florecido mis deseos, ya casi olvidados.
De pequeño siempre soñé con un mundo donde al morir podamos reencontrarnos, y así estar siempre juntos.
Esta es mi história de amor,
Aunque no sea la más típica.
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mcazevedo

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Age : 27
Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
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Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
Shells : 1
Registration date : 2010-01-13

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PostSubject: Re: This is my love story   This is my love story Icon_minitimeWed Feb 24, 2010 12:09 pm

WOW! Great text! I think the original version was really good. Keep writing like this.
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