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tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: tmnt vampire parody "below" Sun May 16, 2010 4:22 pm | |
| sorry but I do not speak much English and so my story was in Spanish I will try that these are in English
Chapter 18: Kazz kawai girl?
Kazz attempt to place the cross on the collar of Mickey's mickey doing it gives instructions to place, when it succeeds Mickey says, "Thank you, cost, but thanks, he says while the two rise from the floor, Kazz it will sit at Soffa of the living room, when you try to sit, right where you sit on Raph appears sitting, apparently in error Kazz sat in the lap of Raph, Raph when he does provocatively said, "Hey flirt, to hear it rises rapidly, while their brothers were sitting in the other room chairs, Kazz little frightened, but impresianada says" that thing are you?, says while turning towards all Mickey approaching she says, "well, rubbing his head, we are a species of turtle mutant vampire graft, ah ... and practice martial arts, Raph says sarcastically:" Speak for yourself, the girl Approaching Mickey squinting and watching it fixed, Mickey a bit nervous and feeling cornered by the look of the girl tries to get away for a bit, when there was a time when I stop Kazz close to him, asks, "do you do?, Kazz while still looking says: "You are a true turtle?, very nervous with this Mickey says," if, swallowing, if I am, Kazz a smile at any moment and jump into the as if he wanted to hug and said rubbing her cheek in one of Mickey: "You are KAWAI, sounding chorus Leo, Raph and Donny said:" KAWAI?Kazz staring at Mickey while still held her in his arms, he added: "If KAWAI, now drop the arms of Mickey and explanatory tone, is a Japanese expression that means pretty or cool, a little confused Donny says," you say wait a minute is a Japanese expression?, and that means pretty or cool?, Kazz with a smile on his face confirms that if Donny after he asks again: "So you think Mickey is cute or cool?, he comfirmed Kazz yes, but now with an embarrassed tone, I do not think that just is KAWAI, but ..., as he says he turns away from everyone and as he says makes a gesture of two index fingers together to make touching at the tips, I think also the red tape is KAWAI, with this spear into the arms of Raph and starts to rub her cheek against one of the, after it fell off the Kazz arms Raph , leaving it with an expression on his face to the tortoise of strangeness, yet his face somewhat flushed, Donny even more confused than before you asked, "and that they are KAWAI for you as you say?, watching it with Kazz a smile says, "because ..., in a tone more embarrassed, I had never met people like that, plus ..., now with a more cheerful tone voviendo Raph's arms are vampires or not?, while Page says his eye, somewhat embarrassed Raph replied: "if we are, getting off his arms now says," because I always wanted to meet a group of vampires, with this winks We broke all while your index finger and smiles , then adds: "Now we will be good friends all, with this going into the arms of Mickey that he was ready to lift it through a hug ... | |
| | | mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Tue May 18, 2010 1:31 pm | |
| OMG! I laughed so much when Kazz said that to Mikey! I didn´t understand some parts because, no offense but your english´s not very good. I still loved it though! | |
| | | tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Tue May 18, 2010 7:21 pm | |
| Chapter 19: Kazz live with us
In the lair of the protagonists in each of the respective rooms of each mutant turtle can see a coffin, except in Mickey's room, which in itself was awake, in the kitchen preparing breakfast, when I was all set to eat, decides to wake their brothers, who were still sleeping, first decides to go to Donny's room when he enters slowly opens the lid of the coffin, when will you see her brother sleeping, hardly breathing and holding hands up to the stomach when they see you whispers: "Donny are you sleeping?, Donny ... Donny, now pecking the face with his finger, Donny ... Donny ..., to feel this, without opening his eyes Donny says with an angry voice, yet sleepy, "you want Mickey?, Mickey from outside the coffin says in a tone higher," you pretend to be sleeping all day?, get up, now pulling the arm, Donny even with closed eyes says angrily: "I eat breakfast and let me peace, Mickey Seguia tugging his arm until he decided to release it and asks," so that was?, settling into his coffin Donny says, " do not know, I think it was a subject that taxes caminanado down the street, surprised Mickey says, "what?, Donny replies:" hey hungry vampire bites it is, now let me sleep, Donny ready to sleep again from afar until you hear the voice of Kazz says: "hello anyone?, with this Kazz feel a breeze that touches the skin feels after a while Raph's voice that tells a provocative tone:"making a rose like you are in a place like this?, as he says he stretches his neck a little and starts caressing one of his hands, his voice sure yet replied gulped: I come to give them a news, before completing the sentence, leaving Mickey Donny's room along with that as they approached where they were rubbed his eyes and yawned, when Mickey saw the girl cry with happiness while expanded its arms: "Kazz!, small, on hearing this Kazz ran into the arms of Mickey for the embrace, being in his arms Mickey lift it a few centimeters off the floor, andwith this Kazz you kiss one cheek to Mickey, Mickey blush with it a bit , and leave it on the floor, after a while of being stared at each other, it feels a hoarse voice, which is from the Master Splinter asked: "Miguel Angel who is our guest, Mickey Kazz look at first nervous and then took a turn and looked at his teacher, after a few seconds of stammering
Kazz present themselves as the friend of Mickey and his other brothers, after a while talking to the wise rat Donny asks, "Hey and announced that he wanted to give us?, Kazz said watching it:" Oh yeah wait for me here, Kazz he ran towards the exit of the gurida giving to the elevator that opened onto the street, after a short time Kazz back with some bags and a pet turtle species the size of small cats in his free hand, with that said cheerfully "I come to stay with you, everyone was impressed by the surprise, after saying this Kazz leave your bags on the floor while Donny approaches her and asks:"wait a minute, you say that property to stay here in a sewer with four turtle mutants, of which three are vampire fangs and could nail you at any time?, after saying this the Master Splinter adds, "if I did not supervise , after this Mickey adds confusing "and that you stay with us, not that I do not want to close now more nervous tone, on the contrary I like being with you and stuff, but that you do not have a home has on the surface?, indicating with his finger to the roof of his home, Kazz replied hugging her pet with two arms and with a sad voice and looking turtle that looked sadly: "My house was burned , Now with his eyes almost in tears, there was a fire and my tutor died product of the flames, with this all stare at each other with expressions rather sad and distressed ...
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| | | mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Wed May 19, 2010 7:41 am | |
| I can´t wait to see what happens while Kazz´s living with the turtles! | |
| | | tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Thu May 20, 2010 5:06 pm | |
| Chapter 20: forged a new family
while all were in the kitchen having breakfast, sipping black tea Kazz an elegant cup as if the fifteenth century in England, everyone was well antentos to hear about what happened to your home, a little impatient Leo asks, "well that was what happened?, Kazz ending to swallow all your sip of you says, looking down: "Well, I do not remember much, but remember that I was taking a nap when I feel that my turtle starts to scream, and then .. . before they complete the sentence Donny asks, "Wait, you say that your turtle was screaming?, as though I would love for communicating something?, saying Kazz says:" if, if my turtle wants something from me communicates different However, as he says everybody is looking at the turtle from the girl who was down in a corner of the kitchen eating cat food on a plate red dog, Donny says turning his gaze to the girl, adding: "incredible that animal want to communicate something, Mickey adds: "It sure as his name?, Kazz replied:" Well ... still not given a name, Mickey proposes happy: "if you name you put my name please ... Raph sarcastic adds: "Tiny, reiterating the theme Leo says," well, you feel that your turtle wanted to wake up and then with a sad look Kazz says: "I saw that some furniture from my room were on fire when I saw this, take my turtle in my arms, try to salvage some things from my room, Donny Question: "what kind of things?,Kazz replied: "What we found from the flames, in order to take it, when I did, get off immediately on the first floor looking for my tutor, but not found, at first I thought it was out, so went out into the street, but neither saw about when I'm turning to see how my home, I see his silhouette that falls to the floor through the window of the living room, at first wanted to go to save her, but the flames consumed the entire building, at first I thought about going to live with one of the friends of my tutor, because once went to his house once to stay for the holidays, also had some of my belongings in your home, but when I visited, I surrender my bags with my stuff and told me with a look of terror: "I do not see you, Raph outraged hits the table with his fist and says," How dare you refuse you that lady a shelter, and leaving you in the middle of nothing your life, sad Leo asks as the girl is wrapped in an embrace of Donny, "and what happened to your parents?, Kazz coldly replied:" I have no parents, I am an orphan, now facing the floor with a look sad, I was in an orphanage until my tutor at age 10 I picked up the Master Splinter rising from the table he says sweetly: "So now I'll be your father, with a look of joy, yet almost with tears says: Really?, Master Splinter assists with the head while their children are close to Kazz, Happy Mickey says, "and we will be your brothersKazz even happier says: "seriously?, All while attending his head, Kazz they try to give a group hug, embraced until he takes an expression that you have forgotten something, then rises from the place of where he was embarrassed and says something, "but ... Mickey says," but what? ... Kazz says with a happy voice and looking with a smile and shut one eye and your index finger Lebat "but to be my brothers will have to follow some rules, Donny says with a worried tone "or not ... as he says, Kazz says:" Number one, I will not be spied in the bathroom, number two, I do not want my things until Usme I am number three do not want to hide in my room to scare me, number four did not want to bite me without authorization, and number five ... throwing himself into the arms of Mickey: "I will call Oni-sama, looking at them and winking the eye, understand?, Leo tells Donny and Raph: "It'll be difficult to adapt to it, after all attend to speak with the head ...
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| | | mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Fri May 21, 2010 12:30 pm | |
| Aw...Kazz has a family now. I want to be part of the turtles family 2! | |
| | | tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Sat May 22, 2010 10:48 pm | |
| beginning of the second season, called Vampire TMNT Parody: REVELATIONS, the name is so because in this season many puzzles are solved, but others are more enredados.bueno enjoy it.
Chapter 1: friendship or attraction?
Soffa Mickey was in the room playing video games, while Donny read some books, but instead of sitting in a normal fashion in a chair was hanging from one of the bars at the top of his head, while Leo and Master Splinter were practicing how to use their katanas, after a moment Raph appears out of his room, as if he had just woken up, stretch your arms and start to look everywhere, as if you were looking for something, after a moment, decided to ask air: "hey where Kazz?, Leo replied from where he was:" I do not know, Donny until you remove the look of your book adds: "I think Mickey knows, now with a more ironic tone, a Mickey?, Mickey put on pause the game replied: "She must be sleeping in his room, apparently exaust when I'm the winner in the Guitar Hero, Donny, on hearing this, pretended tubiera a mild cough while still reading his book, this gesture Mickey changed what he said and says, "is well tie, Donny continued Coughing, but this time with more intensity, it looks somewhat frustrated Mickey makes him change what he said last time, but with an angry tone, "Okay, okay, I lost, I did not believe it was so good for gaming, now looking at who was still in Head and Donny says," you happy?, Donny pretending to be managed throat says ironically: "I think cough is gone,Raph knowing this, asks Mickey, "and she is alone in her room sleeping?, Mickey replied while resumes his game:" I think it should be with his super pet turtle apparently believes his dog, show arm, watch me leave, Mickey's arm you could see a few bites, which in itself marks were not always leave their brothers when they feed on, Donny, changing the blade of his book adds: " that you get for trying to spy on her while she sleeps, Mickey defends himself: "I was not watching, just watching her without her realizing he was doing, tells Donny:" yeah right, that's a good meaning for word "spy", speaking slowly Raph says, "then Kazz is in his room sleeping?, Donny replied:" Well yes, why?, now removing his eyes from the book, you want to ask you something?, when he finishes talking occurs Raph realize that disappeared, while in the bedroom of Kazz, you could see the sleeping girl, and her feet her turtle was sleeping when you feel a breeze in the room, the trtuga begins to growl like a dog but feel the presence of Raph in the room begins to feel fear and back, Raph with a devilish look is closer to the girl, as if you were willing to bite, but instead, slips his hand over his cheek Kazz, Kazz slowly beginning to wake up saying, "this cold, with that rises Raphfrom her place and sits at the foot of Kazz, indifferent Raph says, "You like roses?, Kazz says something confused:" if I like that?, Raph replied, "is that to me like on the wall of your room, could have prints of roses, I say to make it look more girl with a smile Kazz says: I like a lot, changing the conversation Kazz look all around the floor of his room and he Raph asked, "Hey have you seen Mickey?, Raph indicating with his thumb out of his room adds:" In the living room playing video games, confused Kazz says: "No, I mean Mickey, my turtle, my pet inaccuracies Raph asked, "you put the name Mickey your turtle?, Kazz while the turtle replied jumps into his arms," Yes, why do not you like?, Raph gets out of bed something desepcionado Kazz, as he heads to the living room, Kazz rises immediately and goes to the same place, leaving Mickey and room yells in the distance: "are you ready for the rematch?, Kazzdirigiendose toward running, sitting next of him and take one of the joystick, which is very similar to a small guitar, and begins to choose a song to start playing, miemtras Raph makes the look in a melancholic and sighs ...
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| | | mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Sun May 23, 2010 5:37 am | |
| Raph likes Kazz! And Mikey lost on Guitar Hero! This chapter was awesome. | |
| | | tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Sun May 23, 2010 7:01 pm | |
| Chapter 2: the kidnapping of Kazz:
In a park in the area, Mickey was leaning against a tree while playing on your PSP, the other side of the tree was leaning Kazz, looking the other hand, both could see that they expected something, which was true, as were waiting for Leo, Donny and Raph, Food finish of a person who was in the park, something boring, Kazz Mickey asks: "Hey do not know when it ended, oni-sama?, Mickey while still playing the PSP, says: "I do not know, can last all night, or just a few minutes ... sigh of boredom Kazz says," and can know that we do two things stuck in vampires?, Mickey replied turning his head toward her: "Well, I do not know why you're here, but what we do know is that if you do not come out to feed, feed on me, now showing the arm with some of the bite that had left his brothers, do not want to end up with holes in the body like a big cheese rounds from time to time Mickey feels a sinister voice that says, "we are done, to feel it immediately screams scaring her with a finer pitch than usual, turn the eyes and notice that Raph was the one who was talking, which had bloody lips, seeing him so, Kazz is coming on, take out a patent leather black briefcase, a white handkerchief, which gives it and says "Wipe-making, with this Raph takes the handkerchief and says," because, after a moment the shadows appear Donny and Leo, Donny says, " While we can go walking down a dark street but it's going to the house in April, as was the one that was closer, as they walked together talking of anything, until at the side of them, spend woman with no less than 23 years, short hair and a color something like a dark red dress with a sort of maid, which was white with black, flat shoes, like those of a Japanese schoolgirl, a lace headbands white and black stockings which came a little above the knee and ended up where he wore a black ribbon tied with a bow and a soft white, as he walked toward his destination, and Kazz Raph stared at her for a moment static in place, after a few seconds, Leo asked, "what happens?, Raph, Raph?, after a moment still walking as if nothing, Donny curious question:" Raph with you?, because you kept watching if you impress the way they dress?, Mickey says laughing: "If you spend Raph, ie if you want Bite and already indifferent Raph replied:" No not that, Donny says, "and it was not the only one stared at the girl's clothing, Leo asks, "what gives you something Kazz envy habiliments not look like that?, Kazz replied:" No not that, now Raph and Kazz at the same time, I feel a presence, In saying this, a strong breeze divided the group into two, and in front of them can see the girl who had just spent holding the shoulder Kazz,immediately, Kazz is unconscious, with this Mickey Girt "Kazz, Raph second screams," Kaz leaves alone, while doing so goes running to her to stop when it does, it falls into a section of the sidewalk when he turns around to look at the girl realizes that it is not, while trying to raise, his other brothers go to his side to help him, when completely closed, start to sniff the air, after a moment Mickey asks: "Raph doing?, Raph unanswered runs to an alley, which had a ladder that was headed towards the roof of a building, it rises to the roof, he meets the girl who is sitting in one of the chimneys of the building when asked Raph agrecibamente sees "where Kazz?, answers ..., the girl replied:" I delivered it if you do exactly as I say, This Raph says, "what makes just be with her without a scratch, the girl is coming slowly into a provocative way, after a few seconds, she appears behind Raph and whispers in his ear: "then opens the door of your home that you could never open , with this away from him and disappears after a while, check one of the pockets of his jacket and pulls out the old key, after looking at it for a while, his other brothers climb to where he is, come to Raph and Leo asks, "Raph happened?, Raph without answering, down the stairs in silence, her siblings remain silent looking at each other confused by the silence of Raph ....
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| | | mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Tue May 25, 2010 10:56 am | |
| This chapter was so cool! Great job! | |
| | | tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Tue May 25, 2010 7:06 pm | |
| Chapter 3: The door never opened, opens
Two nights ago Kazz was kidnapped by the girl dressed in maid, and for two nights of full moon that Raph has not been fed, he spends sitting in the lab watching Donny and playing with the key that the girl got older, without noticing in your pocket, Donny other hand, read books while the head, but this time in the Soffa of the living room, while Leo is perfected in the art of learning again to manage their katanas, next to Master Splinter, after a silence, Mickey comes running with a bunch of papers in his hands while running at towards their brethren, he said: "hey I found the way to find Kazz ... after say, stumbles and spreads the papers all over the floor with this all go towards trying to put it up, Leo to help him, he drops one of the roles in the head, take it begins to read aloud: "wanted girl lost responds to the name of Kazmin Splinterson, I'll do anything for that to recover, reading letters highlighted in orange, whatever,to hear this, Donny says something sarcastic: "again this offering as a reward you?, fending Mickey says," but this is for my sister, not me, Donny him from the hands, I read the paper, closer scrutiny, adding: "You do not think the posters are looking for, should have a photo of the person to whom you wish to find?, Mickey says, scratching his neck," if not I have a picture of Kazz, Raph added with a sad tone, "will not serve these posters, Mickey with a tired tone," it ", but printed more than six hundred, looks Burner While Leo says," You should ask before printing all these papers, Now turn on the things that waste your money?, Mickey says with an ironic, yet cheerful, "but it was not wasted my money that was Casey, now whispering in his ear, if Casey is one of these days to charge me, tell him I'm dead, Donny Raph by asking: "and you say that these signs will serve us are looking for?, Raph watching it seriously:" because he did not miss Kazz, was abducted, that is first Secondly, the girl who took her on the roof of the building told me to get it back, as she opened a door I could never open,Donny touched his chin and says, "but he meant by that?, Sitting in the chair Raph lab Donny says," still do not know, but dbe have any relationship with this key, as he says shows them Key, Donny sees more closely and says, "it may be a master key, with it you could open any door, Leo says," that means she wants to open that door with this key, Mickey asked, "But which would be the door you want to open?, Raph thinks for a moment, after a few seconds you remember something, says "the door was never able to open, after saying these words he exclaims," already!, he runs into Leo from where they were standing yells: "Hey where are you going?, from sunrise says:" follow me I think I found the answer, with that all his followers, to follow come to his old home (the old abandoned house ), To get there, climb the stairs to a door, which was holding a sign that said "not open",when they become all in front of the door, Raph says, "do not remember when we first came to this house and we started to choose our rooms?, Leo and simultaneously deny Donny, but Mickey says, exclaiming:" It is true, I remember you wanted this room, but it was locked from the inside, so that he could not ... after a while they all exclaim: "open, with the intention Leo adds," so if you open this door ... Donny continues the phrase "open done your part of the deal, Mickey adds: "and we will back to Kazz, Raph smiling, enter the key into the doorknob and turn it begins to open, when you open the door encuetrna in a room with a shelf old books, old furniture with porcelain tea set is also very old and elegant, to another corner of the room had a silver casket, closed, in front of them could see a window with curtains of silk that moved with a slight breeze, which was sitting the girl, seeing them enter the room says, "I see you solved the puzzle, I thank you very much, when he said this last bowed to them ...
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| | | mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Wed May 26, 2010 9:40 am | |
| What happens next? I hope they´ll find Kazz! | |
| | | tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Tue Jun 01, 2010 8:48 pm | |
| Chapter 4: The mysterious coffin
Raph arrogant said: "I did what you want to now where my sister?" The girl said quietly putting their hands up to their thighs and intertwined: "Do not worry too much about her, since she is fine, Donny asks, "Wait a minute, if you say it is okay that means that did not want to hurt her, I just wanted you to do the favor of opening this door?", the girl replied with a slight smile: "Well yes, but Mickey said ... dubious: "But what, the girl now adds:" but the deal has a second part, Leo says, "as that second part, or is that just opened this door for nothing?", the girl says, "I never said that, Leo says," then you want from us?, Raph anger directed to her: "I do not care if this treatment is five or eight hundred, the only thing I want is to take a home without Kazz any kind of harm, the girl now has a more serious tone says, "are willing to do anything to see this man?, Raph decided, but with a worried tone replied:" If I'm ready for anything,the girl replied, "Well, now approaching that coffin, I want to open the coffin, Raph to the coffin, which in itself was strange, because it was more of a grayish color than others, at the top had one kind of bat-shaped logo in red, Raph looking at the coffin, stooping to look more closely, Raph says: "It is very likely not be able to open, others close to him, while doing so Leo question, "why not Raph?, Raph with his hands trying to open the coffin, but can not move much the top, at the same Timpo he tries to open, smoke from his hands, as if burning embers, and while screaming in pain from burns that he formed, after seeing it for a while, Leo Raph pushed way back to a halt, worried everybody comes to him as trying to help him, Leo says looking at her hands, which had severe burns, "Raph happened?, Raph with trembling hands, the look for a moment and says with pain:" the coffin is made of silver, if a vampire comes in contact with silver or gold metals that are considered purified , comes to have severe burns, serious Donny says: "You already knew that the coffin was made of this material not it, raph nods sadly, after a few seconds, goes to the top of the coffin to try again when is about to do, Leo holds your wrist and try to hold him when he realizes this, look at her brother with anger, but changes the expression of his face to a sad and worried, Leo says with a sigh: "if you're willing to do whatever it takes to recover Kazz not want you to do things that can hurt youLeo after a while you loose wrist when Raph decides to attempt to open the casket one more time the girl dressed as a maid tells worried: "Please stop, Raph rotate the view to her and says," not want to open it, the girl looks at him sadly and said: "I do, but I also want this sound, bows and says to put back straight," my lord, with that Raph is placed standing is looking at his hands, then directs the light toward the girl and said sadly: "I guess the deal is not going, not you, the girl says with a smile happy" on the contrary, your reward is in the room you like it, Raph thinks for a moment, while his brothers, when Donny was about to tell you the answer, he realizes that Raph and the girl are not, Mickey says: "where were?, Donny replied: "The girl is not, but he can be Raph, all leave the room, and follow up Donny Raph's room, when Donny and Leo try to enter, retreat with a terrible cough, Mickey when he enters the habitacionles question from inside: "look happens to them?, Donny from afar of the door tells the bed and room Raph was a Victorian Gothic style, which was lying at her feet Kazz Raph watching, Mickey realizes that in the part where she lay was surrounded Kazz red roses, Mickey remembered the smell of roses and garlic vampires do not support them, left our room to help his brothers when he left the took place away from the room, meanwhileRaph looked as Kazz slept, aprobechando that his brothers were not with him, seized the moment to move a step closer to Kazz, when approaching Kazz, slid his hand gently on her face, after a moment withdrew his hand his face, that she was awakened when he woke up, turned her face toward his brother and said, half asleep, "is still frozen, with this, Raph the rise, while his brothers was recovering from the cough in room being, the Kazz down the stairs on the back, cry when I look cheerful Mickey "Kazz!, with this Kazz is under immediate Raph's back to hug Mickey, as he walked into the arms of Mickey shouted cheerfully : Oni-sama, Mickey was so happy as when he embraced the girl, get up a few inches off the floor, after a moment out of their old home and headed for the sewers, as they did before all serious Kazz said: "boys , what if you practice martial arts?, Leo tells Kazz: "seriously?, Kazz adds concerned: it is that no such things occur again, Mickey with a smile touches his shoulder and said: "Clearly, if, with that smile and throws Kazz on to hug when the hugging, Kazz kisses him on the cheek for a moment Mickey is somewhat paralyzed, while blushing, when placed back on the floor rubbing his neck says, "But I, now with a brighter note, I will be your teacher, Donny says with a sarcastic tone:" And you think you can consider his master, a tone happy Kazz says "If oni-sama, master-sama,with this they get into a dark alley to go down the sewer.
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Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Mon Jun 07, 2010 3:17 pm | |
| Gosh, this story´s just so fantastic! | |
| | | tsukino BARA
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| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Tue Jun 08, 2010 6:22 pm | |
| Chapter 5: the first day of training
Kazz was asleep in his Victorian-style bed with your pet at his feet, in your room you can see a shadow approaching his bed quickly, when the shadow is approaching the height of your face, you feel a wind coming the room, feeling an immense cold, Kazz opens his eyes and sits on his bed, while doing shouts happening?, when he does figure is holding the neck Raph Mickey and keeping it suspended in the air about fifty centimeters of soil, with difficulty Mickey says, "Raph these choking me, trying to ditch the hands of it asficciaban Raph, Raph looks at him angrily and said almost angrily, but with an ironic tone:" this will going to try to spy on Kazz while she sleeps, with difficulty speaking Mickey says, "I was not spying, just wanted to see if she was ready, Raph on Mickey's face and tells him:" list for that?, Mickey almost a shade of blue in the face and with more difficulty speaking replied while indicating with his finger: "Ask it, Raph looking Kazz with a pitying look letting loose his brother lying on the floor unconscious, Raph is about to bed, throws Kazz's pet out of bed to become a space to sit, to sit at the feet of Kazz asks, "that's what I was talking about Mickey?, ready for you?, meditates by Kazz a moento carried off a finger to his cheek and closed her eyes and after a few seconds sounds in a snap his fingers and says, "I know, oni-sama speaks about today's trainingIntrigued Raph says: "Training?, Kazz attends her head and added:" Today we're going to start my training to make me a tough girl says I'm teaching her few muscles of the arms, like you, raph surprised to hear this says confused "like me?, Kazz assists with the head slightly with a smile on his face, seeing her this way Raph blushes and clearly do not rub your neck and turns his head away, as you do say something nervous, "Kazz ... you ... you with a fast pitch and closing his eyes and taking her hands, she says," Kazz you like my personality, suddenly feels a feminine tone did not come from Kazz, Mickey but he said: "Raph please know that I am committed, on hearing this rpah open your eyes, and seeing that Mickey has his hands in his hands instead of those of Kazz, Raph is getting out of bed angry determined to beat him when Kazz says, "if you go to hit it out of my room I need to change, with this animated Raph says:" With pleasure, Mickey exclaims, "what?, exclaiming after this, the subject of Raph back of the neck and drags him out of the room of Kazz, when they left the room a few minutes later, a diver came Kazz sports and a sports shirt which was not adjusted to cuerpoy shoes, all in one color , black, esepto by the hair she had in her ponytail was red with color ecajes over half black and a red roseand its characteristic bell collar adjusted his collar around his neck and red Victorian image of woman holding a rose in it, Raph and Mickey stay for a while watching her paralyzed from head to foot gaping, Mickey approaches her, she very courageous says: "Once you Kazz, stipulating the throat, different, Raph appearing next to Mickey says," if you're going to do today go out or go to an elegant party, Kazz dragging out a slight laugh says, "this is the athlete Kazz, extending their arms to the sides and making a turn, When finished the turn with a serious tone Mickey says, "well we train or not?, Kazz joyful cries," oni-sama if now a little more would make a bow to Mickey, sorry master-sama, to put back right, a page will look at his brother mutant, after a few minutes, Raph and his other brothers watched as Kazz trying to fend off the blows he threw Mickey , to defend one, Mickey manages to accidentally hit her in the cheek, Kazz hit so hard that it fell to the ground, sat Losque see this rise was immediately seen as Kazza, the JOINING her, says Leo "Kazz are you okay?, Kazz something sitting on the floor and looks neutral says:" If I'm right, scolding donny Mickey says, "to try to be something next most merciful, mickey Kazz looks paralyzed with sadness but then you look at the fist and see that it is bloody, Kazz in the ground, touch the lip, and remove his hand from his lip notes that your fingers have blood,with a slight smile on his face and says, "is not just blood, after a moment to look at it, look at their brethren who are paralyzed as Kazz's blood on his hand, raph on its part has lip trembled and hands, Kazz I look puzzled, Raph with his hand shaking, grabs the hand of Kazz to lift the floor, lift it pushes his strength and his body wrapped in his arms, bringing his face to his shoulder whispers ear: "do not really want to do this, but I can not resist, after saying this, Raph does present its fangs ready to bite Kazz ...
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Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Wed Jun 09, 2010 5:51 am | |
| Wow! This was muy bueno! I want to know what happens next! | |
| | | tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Sat Jun 12, 2010 10:01 pm | |
| Chapter 6: loss of teeth
everybody is paralyzed when Raph is about to bite Kazz until Mickey reacts rapidly and is approaching the running, when is very close to the succeeded in giving a blow with his fist in the face with such force that released a Raph and Kazz falls to the ground when dropped, Mickey with the intent to threaten and diminish it, placed his foot on his chest, while still retaining it on the ground tells a voice of authority: "I do not want to do it again, while Kazz moreover do recover from inaccuracies with Donny and Leo who are with her, as you do, Mickey tells Raph with a smile on his face: "I believe that immortals are not as strong as they seem , Raph with an expression of anger, which then becomes an ironic expression of happiness, laughs a time, until Mickey tells doubtful "that's so funny?, Raph stops laughing and says with a smile macabre: "you think you just put your foot on my chest manages to stop me?, because let me tell you that I've seen all I can doWhen he finishes talking, Mickey turns Donny looked down from afar saying to him: "Be careful, after saying this, Mickey turns to the place where it was Raph, then realizes that he was only black jacket buckles, while inspecting the place where his brother behind him begins to spread some fog for no reason, with something of fear of looking back, it stays static and swallowing, from the fog came the image of Raph, leaving exposed his white shirt under his black sleeveless blazer and red tie, as they approach Mickey whispered with his macabre tone "is one of the skills we have the immortals, we also have the ability to transform our exclaves who give us the win, and now you show it, after saying this opens the mouth to expose their fangs and bite on the shoulder Mickey, Mickey's fear does not move and just wait eyes closed that the bite does not hurt when Raph is about to do, falls to the ground, as if he had been beaten, and indeed, it had beaten Kazz right in the jaw with a bo staff he had found lying around when Mickey realizes he is out of Peril Fund, falls to the ground leaning on his knees and palms of your hands and breathing deeply, Kazz attempt to lift the floor says placing her hand on his neck with a sweet tone and slowly: "these oni-sama well?Mickey trying to clear his mind of fear that had just experienced says while rubbing his face with his hand desucupada: "If I'm good, now looking to Raph is not off the ground, but I think now if Raph is wrong, Donny Leo and Raph trying to resuscitate doing awakening when they finally make it, Raph slowly rises from the ground, moaning in pain, says when this kneeling on the floor and rubbing the face: "what did I hit?, Donny replied ironically: "it was a girl with just one day of martial arts training and a giant bat, Leo corrects him:" in fact is a bo staff, Donny corrected almost frustrated because I asked, "so how are you so sure that so called?, Leo wise replied, "because Mr. Splinter taught me the names of all ninja weapons we practice together, Raph almost standing start to feel discomfort in his mouth, after a moment they all go to the to know what was happening, after a few seconds of silence, Raph spit a little blood, which left a significant puddle on the floor, after a moment of looking at the Mickey pool of blood and Kazz make gestures of disgust and contempt for what they saw, after that relieved Donny says, "Well it was just that, a sore mouth for a little bleeding but significant roots neck Mickey says with a tone of doubt:" if only it was. .. what you said, if you are not looking to spend no more Kazz, back to ... complete the sentence before Raph stops everything and says, "wait, watching the pool of blood,indicating with his finger, look, others look at the puddle of blood and at first only see a mini pool of crimson red, but then realize that on the surface of the pond are two white dots floating, when they see everyone's surprise, and immediately turn their eyes to Raph who was with one of his fingers in his mouth inspect the place where should be their tusks, Donny curiosity coming towards him, asked to open the mouth and look inside is surprised that instead of sharp and pointed teeth, the square is without any kind of point with this closes the mouth of Raph and turning towards the pool of blood, said in a trembling voice, indicating the pool with finger was also trembling: "amm ... guys, the white spots you see in, swallowing, pool are ... the fangs of Raphael, with that to everyone's surprise and was paralyzed from the inaccuracies ...
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| | | mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Sun Jun 13, 2010 5:31 pm | |
| This story´s just getting more and more fantastic.... | |
| | | tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Fri Jun 18, 2010 9:34 pm | |
| Chapter 7: a night without fangs
The Master Splinter looked into Raph's mouth to see if it was true what Don had said, while analyzing every corner inside the mouth of Kazz Raph went to his room to change clothes and his brothers distributed around the place where Master Splinter was with Raphael, Master Splinter when Raph asked to close his mouth, got up and went to the place where was Donatello, Master Splinter asked, "Where are your fangs?, Don is reviewed the pockets of his black coat, one coat of the two teeth that belonged to Raph, as he showed what he had in his hand said, "here goes, Mickey to see that Raph had tusks in his hand said with disgust: "Donny and you can have teeth Raph on your hands?, indicating with his finger Raph tusks, estubierno stuff in your mouth, angry Raph tells of where it arose and was" at least my mouth is clean yours however, must still have the crap you ate last week, tried to stop Leo adds: "guys, please, that's disgusting, Raph turned to sit on the floor of the room of Master Splinter says with a sigh: "and now I'm going to do?, looking the other way, without tusks not be fed, sighing again and looking to the floor with a melancholy face, that I do?, after saying this, Master Splinter and leave Donatello Kazz enters the room and there wearing a dressred and black, in the part of the skirt, was composed of black lace puffed genre and the red bottom, as in black patent leather shoes and a red and black striped socks that reached the knees, the top a sort of corset black, low wearing a kind of long-sleeved shirt that exposed her shoulders, hair in pigtails with her little red tape, neck adjusted his collar and his collar bell red medallion with the figure of the woman holding the rose in her hands, her, Raph immediately approached her, leaving aside all his melancholy over the loss of their teeth, something just Kazz says sadly: "how are you the blow I gave you?, Raph says rubbing his cheek, "it were not bad, but that if you left me with no teeth, Kazz surprised at what he had said it says:" seriously?, and how many you out, now hastily , oh no you'll be without teeth, you have to eat pre-digested food, I read aloud with a voice of rejection: "not chose another chapter of this fanfiction to say nastiness?, Raph by touching the face with a voice Sweet says, "Do not worry the only teeth that were did you get my fangs, but that is unimportant, Kazz something desperate," as that is the least of your most important pull teeth for a vampire, you're going to do? , Raph intet to reassure her, with his hand, his face makes him look into her eyes, seeing this picture demaciado Mickey is surprised and starts waving his arms in the style of Japanese cartoon says something desperate: "Raph can not do that?, Raph chuckled:" what is wrong with doing this, as he says about Kazz's face closer to hers, while doing so, Kazz sit still staring at him with shining eyes, with this Mickey waving his arms faster and with anger, until I leave quietly in a pocision of tantrum, after this look at Leo said in a childish tone, "I read Raph is making me angry, Leo for their party took a sip of a cup of black tea and he said as looked to a book, told with a very elegant tone: "Dear Mickey please do not bother me I'm trying to read a little, Mickey with a face of doubt says, "where did you get all this, pointing to the table and chair in the room of Master Splinter, where he was, Leo replied, taking the view of his book and headed towards the table and chair where he was "that is me, this fanfiction has not had a lot of sense for us to say, when I answer this, Mickey leads the eye back to that followed Kazz Raph and looking at each other, after a moment Kazz said," if you have problems Raph in feed, away from it and showing her bare shoulder, I am available to bite, Raph with this is about ready to bite her when Leo bites her shoulder from a distance he says without looking away from the book: "You have no fangs recalls, in this Raph unseat her teeth Kazz's shoulder and says, "and knew it, Mickey suggests a scandalous laugh with his finger and says:" I wanted to bite fangless Kazz, Raph is about ready to hit on until it reaches the Master Splinter to Donatello to the room, to go see Leo sitting on a table with a chair taking only black tea and reading a book, Donny asks confused: "Where did you get that?, Leo replied," I do not know things in this chapter are somewhat rare, Donny trying to evade the issue: "Well I'm going to announce something even rarer, all watching it, after directing Donny eyes on the Master Splinter who attended with his head, now looking at all says: "I think Raph condition of being a vampire gives birth oportudidad meant to replace the tusks, everyone is looking at Donny, Leo is the only that says, "but as you can do that, donny voice teacher tells confident and happy at once:" it is very easy, now with a white coat and glasses yuna baton slate showing pictures of a wise to what is explained, the teeth of a vampire like a shark's teeth are strong and can cut anything, but if these are eventually fall for whatever reason, these are replaced by new ones that located behind the original, now with your normal clothing, Leo adds, "that is, Raph has replacement teeth behind their original teeth?, Donny says," not in that sense similar to the shark, which they say was quic. Master Splinter .. the whole "he meant that in a short time to recover their tusks Raphael, but until then will be mortal, Raph saddened and disheartened" mortal?, aah and how long will it?, Master Splinter replied: " a week, until then you can not drink blood, discouraged Raph says, "aaah, and I as like, Mickey trying to encourage touches his shoulder and says," Look on the bright side, Raph says bitterly, "which good side ?, Mickey lifting a finger to complete air, "fewer people will die because of your absence, so when there will recover twice as many people to whom you can bite, Raph with less encouragement than a while ago:" I know that's not really comforting?
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| | | mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Sun Jun 20, 2010 7:27 am | |
| LOL! So that´s why Raph´s teeth fell! | |
| | | tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Fri Jun 25, 2010 8:57 pm | |
| Chapter 8: the melody of hypnosis
Raph was awake while Donny and Leo were sleeping in their coffins, Raph was sitting on the sofa in front of the TV watching the eclipse movie trailer, still watching her television, Mickey and Kazz were training with Master Splinter, a moment Raph another turn off the TV and decided to do without leaving the sofa as they were trained, Mickey was struggling with Kazz Kazz until he jumped up and hit him in the face, with this Mickey fell to the ground and stopped the fight Master Splinter, Raph ran to help him, when he helped get off the ground as to what Raph asked, "Are you OK?, mickey pain responds:" yes, but with an incredible pain in the madibula, Kazz rapidly approaching to help you and apology sorry says: "Oh! no, this is the second time I hit someone in the jaw, closer to Mickey and holding her hand, forgive me?, Mickey almost blushing and with trembling hands he said:" There Kazz problem, now rising from the floor and rubbing his cheek, the strength of your kicks is improving, yet I have recentes jaw, Raph adds sarcastically, "a kick out of these is compared with what they did to me, Master Splinter was Kazz approaches, he plays shoulder to turn into when it does, the two make a bow to front, Master Splinter says, "I see you are gaining strength, but not the channel you know well, work tomorrow agree on that?, Kazz again made a bow before him and respectfully said: "If master-sama,with this, Master Splinter away to your room, while doing so, also Kazz away to her room to change his clothes sport to one of its gothic-lolita dress, while going to his room, Raph back to the couch to turn the TV, when about to take the remote control, mickey seizes it, and that is turn on the TV, Mickey looks with a smile and says, "we sit Raph, showing free space beside sofa on, there is much space, indifferent Raph says, "No thank you, Raph moves away from the sofa to his room, but before arriving at her apartment, she realizes that there is a labtop, turned in laboratirio Donny, Raph question Mickey aloud "that thing hear and there, indicating with his finger computadore, Mickey turns to look at what you stated Raph, brother notes indicating what this says in the normal way" is a labtop, confused Raph says, "a labtop?, Mickey confirms:" If a labtop, the deal last night to upload some photos to my Facebook, but did not go as well as we expect, Raph is close to the small computer and start doing click on an icon of a musical note, from there click on a folder that had his name and could see inside that folder had many clues for breeding, then clicked on one song called "fur elise", to make Double click is heard the melody of Beethoven on the piano, hearing this song, Raph started to move his fingers as if you were playing the piano,after a moment to hear the song again and again and again, decided to click on another song, which was called "instrumental Cantarella," which was a song that began with a violin and piano, listening to the solo violin, Raph got up the seat where he was and started to get carried away by the music of the violin pocicion putting their arms as if he were truly touching and moving as if he knew as playing a real violin, after hearing this song about 3 times, Mickey was up from the sofa and leave the TV on, Raph invaded by the music of the violin, I know where he was headed to his brother, who was headed toward the exit, after a few hours playing pretend Seguia Raph a violin while listening to loud music until Donny and Leo watched him in silence while they laughed at him softly, when she turned around and saw his brothers laughing at him, asked angrily: "That ?, his brothers just looked the other way while they said "nothing, Donny change into the subject and looking everywhere for something says," Hey, Mickey?, Raph output stating: "I was on the sofa for a moment viedo you tele, and then came out, worried Leo said, "came out well and where?, Raph said ironically:" And I know that I am not your babysitter, now with a worried tone looking at a clock on the wall, but pulled ago several hours, Leo asks again: "And do not say anything, where taxes, with whom taxes, or any point of interest?, Raph shakes his head as he frets, "No, I do not say anything, Donny touching the chin with his hands said:" I miss Leo said seriously: "we should not find it strange or who knows what could be doing, this, Raph takes his black jacket and puts buckles before leaving with his brothers, went out, Raph feels the sound of a piano playing "Fur Elise" by Beethoven, to keep quiet for a while listening to the melody, is running to the origin of music, his brothers pursued confused and come to his old home, which was the abandoned house where they lived at the beginning of history, coming in, went to the second floor of the house, which the music was louder, the sound of piano coming from the room where the coffin was that Raph was never able to open, beside him, was a piano that was being played by the girl's maid dress again near the coffin was Mickey, who was staring at him, as though I would love for open, angry Raph tells her: "you want now?, Donny approaching Mickey is doing away the coffin, it fails to feel like your brother want to get there, Leo asks the girl: "you did to my brother?, ending the girl playing the piano, stands up and says as he heads Mickey, and hugs him from behind, while supporting his head in the Mickey says: "the wine of their own volition I did nothing, Donny asks," then that is frozen there staring at the coffin?,the girl says, "because he wants that will be, Raph says:" Hey wait a minute, before you wanted it will be, now you say that my bro wants it will be staying, the girl said: "Well yes, but like you you could not open it, you have to be the who there will be, the saying that, Mickey tries to open, when opened, shows a lot of dust and everyone starts to tocer esepto Mickey who stays in a kind of indifferent expression on her face with her body paralyzed in a position where it dissipates a bit the dust cloud, we see that inside the coffin is the body of someone, but everyone is paralyzed as the body without moving inside the coffin ...
continue (note: the song can be heard Cantarella intrumentalse youtube, is a song that I like so the add in this chapter, the performers of the song is called "vocaloid") | |
| | | mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:11 am | |
| I know that song. It´s cool. *cough* Moving on, *applauds* wooho! Another wonderful chapter! | |
| | | tsukino BARA
Number of posts : 81 Age : 30 Location : santiago de Chile Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : Raph better if it were a vampire, I love it so flippant and rude to me whenever key tusks 1313 Shells : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-10
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Thu Jul 01, 2010 4:24 pm | |
| Chapter 9: the skeleton
to dissipate the cloud of dust, Donny opened his eyes as a sign of print and said a little frightened, "is a skeleton, all stare at the skeleton, until Mickey was in a state of indifference, Raph, after a moment to look the skeleton was in the coffin, turn eyes to the girl, which was static in a very upright position, Raph says seeing her so indifferent, yet with an angry tone: "I wanted to open this coffin for?, to see a corpse that is sure the time is old, not you, the girl stayed static, he replied only: "For me it is something more than just simple bone in the process of decay, and you should mean the same thing, but Raph Crossfade ironic tone said, "so then they mean for you?, retiring girl of the room where they were all told before leaving:" very soon will, upon retirement, Mickey collapses to a few centimeters of the open coffin, when this happens everyone is trying to revive him until Donny slaps him in the face very hard to wake up immediately Mickey wakes up and complaining of pain in the cheek, when asked immediately woke up Donny "Mickey are you okay?, confused Mickey replies," with a pain in the face, but well, now realizing something, hey, since when has this decoration den so rare?, off the ground, it resembles the old house where we were, Leo gets up from the floor and looking at Donny adds: "if our Mickey,Raph Mickey hit in the neck, and then tells him angrily: "clumsy this is our old home, Mickey more confused at first asks," and as we get here?, Missed Donny says, "you do not remember Mickey? , You wanted to come here or not?, Mickey is thoughtful for a moment before adding with a brief: "No, Leo asked now:" I really do not you remember, or even that opened the coffin?, indicating the coffin with his finger, Mickey looks inside the coffin and said after a cry in a finer tone than usual and scared, "There is a skeleton inside that thing, sarcastic Raph says, so do not tell me, to think which are the coffins to store candy?, watching it with indifference Mickey replied, "Well I'm going to know you are occupied coffins to sleep and I will know you are not as skinny as this gentleman, Donny goes to the bank the coffin, where it starts to look up and down the skeleton, after a brief moment Leo is joined to the observation, after a while asks, "do you do?, Donny replied in a voice cold and calculating: "The bone structure of this skeleton is unlike anything I've seen other, Leo asks," so that's different?, looking at the skeleton, Donny replied: "The structure of the skull is not human, is as of some animal, like that of a small mammal, now indicating the feet of the skeleton, in addition to human feet have five toes on each foot, but this has only three, now indicating that apparently hands were clasped on the that should be the chest, and hands only have four fingers,Leo looks at Donny and says, "then deduce from this?, Donny says seriously:" I conclude that ... before completing the sentence, Mickey says while rubbing his hands on his shoulders: "I Düzce we should back to the den because it is very cold, Raph with the intention of hitting him, and he does not touch the man and says, "okay, we will terminate the deductions at home, when they are all gathered in the den, Donny starts explain to Master Splinter and Kazz of what happened and what they saw inside the coffin, the end to explain, Kazz hugging his little pet in his arms, he says, "but you are sure the bone structure of the skeleton was like an animal?, Donny Kazz completes the idea of adding "in fact was rather a small mammal, maybe a close relative of the rodents, but had an incredible size, was almost the size of a normal adult, forty or forty-five years, Master Splinter pensive for a moment, until he adds sadly accompanied by a walk to your room: "I think that should open that coffin, it is but should never be in that house, when entering his Master Splinter room, close the door, closed all are thoughtful and yet confused by what Master Splinter had told them, Donny is thoughtful for a moment and adds, "now that I think ... Leo adds," that thing Don? Donny complete the sentence: "It is likely that the skeletal bone estrucctura we saw tonight is very similar to bone structure to Mr Splinter,Raph concludes somewhat confused, "or you say that the skeleton we saw today has any resemblance to Mr. Splinter?, Donny back to think for a moment and says," I'm not sure, but it is very likely that if, Leo asks, "then do it for positive proof, Donny replied:" I do not know, but that somehow you can compare the two bony structures and arriving at a conclusion, the problem is how you might do something like that ?, Kazz yawning contagious yawning and her little turtle says, "good question you can overnight this topic, I'm going to sleep, leaving the turtle in the ground goes to her room and her turtle behind it, Mickey also yawning while stretching the arms adds: "Well I'm going to bed, moving away from them says:" Good night, others will respond with the same sentence and Donny says he sees when entering your room: "I also Mickey would like to know why no memory of what happened today?, Raph says with an upbeat tone: "it must be because it is Mickey, with Donny and Leo attend this head ...
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| | | mcazevedo
Number of posts : 7905 Age : 27 Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal) Warning Level : Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations. Shells : 1 Registration date : 2010-01-13
| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:09 pm | |
| wow! ya know what? I liked it! | |
| | | tsukino BARA
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| Subject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below" Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:06 pm | |
| Chapter 10: the great research
Kazz and Mickey were in the area of training with Master Splinter, while Kazz was Attacking with Mickey, Raph was watching TV very focused, believing that Leo is approaching from behind him to bite, when about to do, Raph da back view, and the notes with a menacing stare, with this, Leo said with a smile hiding ironic and hands behind your back: "I would not do anything, I, now speaking broken, he was ... tried .. . That no one, now indicating with his thumb the other way, I already taxes, Raph continued watching it fixed until Leo was removed to the laboratory where Donny was reading some books, I read out of curiosity, approached him and asked, "that do?, Donny without taking his eyes from his book answers indifferent: "read only that's all pretending interest Leo again asked him:" and you are reading?, watching it now Donny replied, "are some of the books I bring my private library of our old house,Leo somewhat surprised to see the number of books that I had into the pit of his desk, and he asked again, and all these books tell you the trjiste in your library?, Donny answered: "No, some brought Raph, Leo looking the cover of a book said, "and that deals with all these books?, Donny says seriously:" I'm doing a kind of research, when he said this exalted Raph cried from afar: "research that kind of research?, Donny closing the book he had in his hands, gets up and tells Raph: "I'm trying to find that relationship is that girl and we saw that skeleton again?, but intrigued ... Raph continued," but ... Donny adds, "but still I can not understand that kind of connection that exists between them, more serious now than before, touching the chin with the hand," though, that skeleton is not human could not have any kinship with that girl Raph raising the mana adds: "Wait a minute, the last time we met her, she secretly told me that meant a lot to her skeleton and that also meant something important to me Attacking with Mickey while still Kazz heard this conversation, and on hearing this from Raph, he added as he struggled with Kazz: "but that relationship may have Raph with that skeleton?, Donny intrigued adds:" supocicion is only mine, but may that skeleton is just what may be the remains of the corpse of some of the victims of the tragic past that ran lucky to be his food, Leo adds: "Don, but if it had been that the skeleton had had an appearance more human, 'cause you said you saw only that he had no human appearance, also said there was the possibility that the skeleton was of a species of rodent mutant, Raph now adds, "also said that it is likely that the skeleton tubiera Just as the skeleton of Mr Splinter, to hear this, Master Splinter and Kazz asks Mickey to stop fighting and to take a break, after this happens, Mickey and Donny Kazz approach to stream over about the conversation, when they turned to see the front of his sensei, they realize that this had gone to his room, Donny continuing his talk on what he has discovered so far adds: "Well, among other things that I discovered, are anecdotes of vampires in this book, Mickey says: "example ..., Donny says, clutching a book:" For example in this book says in some part, to the wooden stakes will not kill us, Leo says relieved: "Luckily, Mickey adds sarcastically:" great, now that they have more INPED vampires in the world, "Donny says, "Wait let me finish, wooden stakes we are not removed but leaves us in a state of suspended animation, like in a coma, and the only thing we can revive the blood of another vampire, in another part of book says, that being in that state of suspended animation, the body of the vampire may have the process of any mortal descompocicion travez a prolonged period of time, confusing Mickey says: "eh ... now please Donny Christian , Raph with a more conversational explanation for the Mickey could understand adds, "means being in a coma for a stake in the heart, if this much time there, nustro body rots easily, it somewhat confused Leo Donny says: "But Don, after all this that we just told you want to get there, Donny seriously now concludes:" I mean that it is likely that the relationship between the skeleton that girl saw the other night and Raph is all three are vampire surprised Raph says, "but that as you confiermar?, Donny explains to Raph" might just be mine supocicon that Kazz lachica that rapture to the other may be a vampire, because of the incredible speed he did it and also the incredible feat of appearing in front of us suddenly, Kazz involved in the issue added: "But, what is your basis for claiming that the skeleton you saw the other night is really the remains of a vampire Donny says, "yet the truth is that I have no basis for the skeleton, but we could comprovar, nidiferente Raph says," so as we do that?, Donny says: "We could try to give a portion of our blood to the skeleton if it looks like a corpse is just a simple skeleton of a mutant creature, but if it comes back to life not only comprovariamos my hypothesis, but could also tell us in their own words what is the relationship you have with that girl Leo concludes, "well then we already have plans for the next night, Mickey worried adds:" But if the Master Splinter and forbids us return to that place?, Which will, Donny approached and looking into his eyes and by touching both shoulders will seriously says "this does not do it for fun, because we want to know a little more about who we are, Mickey swallowing, but decided to attend his head without saying anything more ...
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