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Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
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PostSubject: Re: tmnt vampire parody "below"   tmnt vampire parody "below" - Page 2 Icon_minitimeSun Jul 11, 2010 4:23 pm

Wow....just wow. This chapter was so intriguing! Who´s the misterious skeleton? And why does he look like Splinter? I have a slight theory....but I still want to know what happens next!
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Chapter 11: drops of life

Mickey
was sleeping comfortably in his bed, but is suddenly entering his room
a menacing shadow when the shadow is about to shake Mickey, to wake,
waking Mickey gave her cry as a child, when he began to shout shadow
tried to soothe him, any time now realized that it was Leo who was
awakening, seeing his face calm and said trying to catch his breath:
"never again substantially so, now recovered his breath, vampire had
to be this, Mickey sat on his bed and asked calmer now watching it: "in
short, that's what you do at this time trying to scare me?, Leo
replied," I'm sorry Mickey, but I wanted to wake up to find If
you participate in our research, Mickey I look worried to low and add:
"and if something goes wrong, Leo and if Donny is right and if reliving
a vampire, and if out of control, as they stop?, Leo looks
sad and says trying to relieve it: "relax, if he gets decontrol will do
our best to kill again, after saying this, Donny looks at the door of
the room and says," I read if I woke up to mickey ,
Then we can go, Master Splinter and fell asleep, Mickey confusing Donny
asks: "seriously?, And as you know that this sleeping soundly?,and
not acting that is asleep?, indifferent Donny says, "is that I
hypnotized to sleep deeply, Mickey surprised, tells Donny: how to do
that?, Donny replied:" read some books on the skills that
vampires can be acquired with experience, Raph Cries from afar: "look
if you woke the lazy of orange mask could start to move?, Leo bed to
get away from Mickey, Mickey does get up and leave your room, after moments
of being outside the apartment of Mickey, went to the exit, when they
were in the living room of his old home Mickey made a comment while
still moving into the house and I think this
place was more comfortable on the planet, now that I reconsider it
seems very dark and gloomy dead, Raph gave a breath of Airey then
exhale and sigh at the same time said: "I'm home, when they climbed the
stairs, he felt a Mickey-priced chest,
and began to breathe forcefully, stopping for a moment in the middle of
the stairs, he told his brothers who were watching with concern:
"preciento something bad, no it is but something is behind me saying
we should not be closer to the skeleton, Leo says while helping to keep
rising: "everything will be fine, and something bad happens, you know
what we do, to come face to face with the door of the room in where
estabael coffin containing the skeleton, Mickey felt the same pain in
the chest, but more intencidad, trying to dispel the pain he was
holding his chest area where it hurt, was the same area where
intercepted your chest and cross of the rosary that he had prevented the instinct of a vampire corned,so
much pain I felt, was almost lying on the floor, the only thing that
prevented it from falling to the knees were resting on the floor along
with the hand he was not clinging to his chest area in which I felt the
sharp pain, Donny
told Leo and Raph: "you come I will stay with Mickey to find out what
happens when they heard this, for a few seconds looked face to face
while attending his head and opened the door of the room to same
time, when they found the casket, which was open, turned to look at
each other, Raph deep breath and then blow the air as a sigh and said:
"If we want to know more about who we are what we have been we
must, I look at Donny for a moment and then attended her head, stooped
down after that as if I would love for fastening a shoe, but really,
what I wanted was to get a knife that kept tucked in between their
pants and black loafers ,
on rising from the floor Raph showed the knife he had taken her
clothes, when it was showing said: "If I want to test my theory I must
make a sacrifice, after saying this, Donny got up his sleeve for the his
coat, after deabrocho the button on the sleeve of his white shirt to
expose her wrist, Donny trembling hand which held the knife was about
to cut, Raph hand stops him and says, "want me
to do it for you?, with that Donny gave the knife to Raph and have him
make a cut on the wrist when Raph was about to do, Mickey gets up the
floor quickly to stop Raph, if it is running to Donny,
it pushes the other way to prevent wrist was cut, but Raph is not
enough to take the knife to another party, and when Mickey Donny pushed
by the momentum remained on the edge of the coffin,his
head almost inside of him, when I try to get away the coffin, but was
in a very weak state, after a moment of his lips began to fall drops of
blood were directed to the skeleton, when he saw the mouth had
skeletal blood, turning his eyes to his brothers, while touching the
lip just the part where blood was coming out when he saw Raph with a
knife, saw that the knife had a little blood, returned to
rotate the view to the coffin, she saw that skeleton was still there
still, with this desepcionado Donny said: "I do not understand I
thought I could relive a bit of blood, he said the book, Mickey
aliviadodijo:" maybe your book is wrong , as he
turned to side of his brothers, I hear a roar behind him stood the
skeleton wrapped in chains, with this, after a few moments the skeleton
began to take the form of a corpse in process of
decay, fear, Mickey did not dare to look back, and his brothers were
amazed just looking at the skeleton which had become a walking corpse
....

continue ... (could you tell me your theories?, it is just to see if what I think XD)
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Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
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Well, I don´t know how to explain it very well but my theories are that if the misterious skeleton is similar to Master Splinter´s, I think that the "real" Master Splinter must be the skeleton or that the skeleton is Splinter´s brother. tmnt vampire parody "below" - Page 2 417546

Anyways, this chapter was cool as always! tmnt vampire parody "below" - Page 2 431545
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Chapter 12: the undead


when
the skeleton and become a cadaver with pieces of torn flesh and almost
no skin behind Mickey, Mickey and the others were paralyzed for the
printing, Mickey for his part was so scared that did not even take the
trouble to look back to see
what would happen from one moment to another the corpse touched his
shoulder with his hand still had the appearance of a skeleton, when he
approached the corpse that his head was still a skull without skin and
meat at the shoulder and said Mickey in
a voice hoarse panting as if you were forcing your voice to speak: "I
need more ... and terrified Mickey swallowing because the dead had
risen from his coffin he began to speak, asked," that thing,
swallowing again and with trembling hands, do you need?, the corpse
suddenly bend with his bony hand of Mickey's face on one side and began
to breathe forcefully into the neck of mickey and said the same hoarse
and forced his
voice "over the esquicito nectar of your veins, after saying that its
jaw prepares to present his fangs to nail Mickey, as he was about to
bite, someone gives him a kind of dagger with the shape of a cross right
on the part of the skull that is destined to the front when this
occurs, the corpse, let go to Mickey and this falls to the ground
supported by your knees and your palms are flat on the floor to prevent
his fall, when Mickey was pocicion
that his brothers react and help to lift the floor, when Leo and Donny
lift it, put Mickey's arms on his shoulders to carry it home, when they
try to reach the exit, Raph reviews everywhere to find the person who threw that dagger the corpse, but found nobody,while
inspecting the place was back to his brothers, to happen, said Leo
desperate for leaving that place: "Do not stay behind Raph Hurry, when
they reached the exit, Donny try to open the door, but without being
able to achieve, realizing
this, Donny tells Leo, "someone must force the door from the outside,
Leo worried but calm him says," but I suppose there is any way to open
or not?, Donny remained thoughtful for a moment, then He
felt a rumble in the floor above, Raph added: "Think all you want
Donny, but I think we have company, indicating with his thumb the
corpse that had risen again to go after Mickey's blood, with this, Mickey
tries to stand up and say seriously to his brothers, "you try to open
the door while I entertain, mickey now giving back to his brothers and
taking from his belt his nu-Chaka, ran up the stairs to prevent continue
down the corpse, when I try to attack him, the corpse was defended
using his bony hand of its claws had been extended about ten inches of
its normal size, while this was happening, Donny was trying to somehow
wrestle the door, but without achieving anything Leo
attempt to grapple with it, but neither Resusta, giving up Donny said,
"we can not open it is useless, Mickey to hear this while defended the
corpse that attacked him, drawing the eye and said," there must some
form of open, when he said this, his opponent's face trying to tear you
with his claws, but mickey turn their faces to avoid being hit, even
after a few seconds so I feel a pain in the face, and touching the part
of the cheek
hurt him, he realized that blood was coming out, seeing the blood on
his hand, said ironically: "You're good for being dead is not it?,On
hearing this, the corpse lifted its claws into the air and slid his
tongue for them to taste the blood that had been brought to Mickey,
Raph desperate to go looking all over the first floor of the house and
near the entrance to something help
you open the door, I am always looking, when he saw a couple of florets
on the wall of the living room, without a second thought, take one and
head towards the door, Leo to see him as such saber thin
and fragile says, "will you do with it?, Raph replied:" trying to get a
start, surprised Donny says, "I do not think you can open anything with
a sword as weak as this, committed Raph says," try it ,
after saying that rising air foil and one pass break the door handle
with Leo and Donny that open the door in desperation, when they are
outside the three, Donny yells at Mickey: Mickey go now, trying
to continue holding off his opponent, Mickey turns his eyes to the
door, jumps about ten feet of the corpse that attacked him and runs
out, when he is out, his brothers are quick to close the door to
prevent the
corpse to escape, when the corpse is about to leave, they close the
door in my face and put a kind of table that was lying near the door,
the door latches were a kind of hands, when they finish to
do all this, sit on the floor and gasping for tubieron closeness to
release something that could have caused many problems, relieved Mickey
adds: "Wife and I stayed close, getting up from the floor donny" too
close for my taste, Leo rising up the floor and looking at the door "at least not be able to get out of there, and no one may enter,Raph
rising from the ground with his hands foil adds confidently: "who think
that taxes a sword that looks so fragile us out of this, saying that
all attend his head, Raph says lifting the foil in the air:" I
think I'll stay, Mickey ironically asks, "these things will serve to
cut the bread?, Donny hits him in the neck for your comment stupid and
pointless, Leo adds:" Well better go home before dawn, to catch all up
to his home, Donny exclaimed: "I almost forgot, Mickey confused asks:"
that thing Donny?, Donny replied: "that you must release the Master
Splinter of hypnosis, Leo adds wryly:" There is more good to return quickly, now all run towards his home.

the end.
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Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
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Wow...just wow. Poor Mikey. I bet he was terrified when the corpse started chasing him! Nice job!
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Chapter 13: the book

Donny was looking for a book to read between the many books he had rescued from her old home before having the strange percanse walking corpse, while reviewing its Mickey was in front of the TV watching the "next" on the MTV channel from one moment to another, Raph bursts into the room complaining that he could not sleep well during the day, but if you can sleep at night when all his brothers are awake, Donny checking another box of old books he says while he does " will not be because they still do not return your fangs?, Raph replied: "could be, now with a more nostalgic tone, sometimes I miss sank my teeth into something or someone, as I said turning his eyes to see with Kazz an expression of hunger that I was training with Master Splinter and Leo who was practicing with their katanas, Donny while still Usme the box of old books tells Raph: "Until now you do not lost much, since it is not yet full moon, Raph replied: do not care, I miss the feeling of blood on the fangs, Donny stops for a moment to check out books from his box, and stops in a book that had just taken out of the box was dusty and some pages torn, by blowing the cover of the book, start jumping a cloud of dust so extenze that reaches the place where Mickey was watching TV when everyone starts to cough Sprinkle, until from time to time the cloud spreads,Donny realizes a detail of the book's cover, when looking at the book is static, the others come on, to learn about the origin of the dust cloud, I read somewhat intrigued by the cloud of dust, you Donny asked while leaving their katanas on the side: "that was all that dust?, on approaching Mickey also added along with Kazz, but not Master Splinter:" if that dust cloud would not let me see the next chapter complete, now will not know which boy to stay sophie, Donny says with a high voice, "Leave aside this nonsense of reality shows and poneatencion this, Raph asked as he chuckles:" Mickey put attention on something?, let Donny do not ask the impossible, Mickey exclaims, "hey, I if I can I can read very well, Leo adds:" Mickey nobody is discussing about it, Mickey makes an expression of amazement, and then switches to an expression of anger and crying and says shaking his fist in the air "TV ruined my damn attentional capacity and functions of me ... is thinking for a moment and adds doubtful of me ... me ... now giving up Donny asks: "Donny is what we have in mind?, Donny is caught only in silence, after a bit ironic Raph replied:" In your case a wind tunnel, with Mickey appearance of an angry Japanese cartoon says, do not tease me, indifferent Donny asks Mickey: Mickey coincidentally you've written a book?,Mickey leaving Japanese cartoon appearance says, not that I know, now asks Donny, why?, Donny rising from the floor where I was in first place and adding, "because this book has your name on the cover, now showing the book and to show everyone is surprised and paralyzed ....


continue (sorry for having taken so long to Chapter tube complications XD)
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Location : I live in Lisbon. (For the people that don´t know a bit of Geography, Lisbon´s the capital of Portugal)
Warning Level :
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Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
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It´s okay Tsukino! I liked this chapter. Almost all your chapter put a smile on my face. Thanks for writing this story. It´s really refreshing.
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Chapter 14: Symbols and letters

After a moment of being still, Mickey approaches Donny to take the book, when Mickey catches it, look carefully at the cover and check if it really was written by him, Raph from not far from the says, "then it is yours or not?, Mickey is silent, admiring the book for a good time, after sitting on the floor just in front where he was Donatello with his box of old books and beside it a pile of books that had been taken from there, Don Leo asked who was on the floor: "Donny how is this possible?, that is, as Mickey may have written a book, not that I doubt his intellectual capacity, but still I can not explain it, Raph ago hand gesture twisting his wrist and taking the hand toward a low, after it adds sarcastically, "or we're going, chances are that Mickey has not been able to write that book, perhaps the author's name misspelled, or just that lacks the home you clean the dust a little more, after a few moments Mickey tells his brothers, exclaiming: "This book is mine, all exclaimed at the same time voice chorus:" what?, as surprised as Kazz them is closer to Mickey and says while holding onto his shoulder, "but that as it may be?, Kazz look at the book's cover and says in an ironic tone with a serious expression ¬ ¬:" I see yours in the literal sense, Raph asks the girl: "so and why?, Kazz with the same expression on her face replied initial PTA book with his finger:" Just look at the cover of this book, all to see the book saw that in part said <> Leo realizing it had a facial expression like-_-and said Mickey only expect things like that, Donny to add a few words the expression of his face away and listen Leo devoted nowadays what donny had to say: "Well, the book is literally Mickey, but the cover says that someone sent it or give it to you now watching Mickey, Mickey or not?, mickey rises from the floor, and after a few moments up Donny too, and rising Mickey replied his brother looking at the book "but the dirname the person who supposedly gave it to me is not very well at home, maybe tremedio is in the pages of the book, Donny says: Although not rule out that possibility, but now with a suspicious tone, it is likely that, Kazz adds, "but there is nothing we can lose if we try, unless that book came out something like a monster that could eat at all, on hearing this all begin to have chills while continuing Kazz talking and gesturing with his hands as if she were the monster, and perhaps tubiera large tentacles with claws that could cross the meat and then I read over her mouth ... to be quiet and as I was quickly told, "is well understood and Kazz, Donny covering his mouth as if to vomit said aloud, and it disgusted me, shaking Mickey adds:" and I do not felt like opening the book, says this while looking and suddenly drops and adds, "because it better to forget the book and we all go to sleep too late insurance, Raph said getting the book:" I do not think, seeing scared to do that Mickey waving his arms in the air in despair because I knew that would be able to open Raph,when I was about to open, Raph felt an electric shock in my fingers as I tried to open the electric shock was so strong that Mickey came to see a small ray of orange finger touched Raph, Raph this leave electric shock down the book, Donny Raph asked worried, "Raph you're okay now?, Mickey getting the book reads aloud:" received an electric shock when I touch the book, Leo surprised Mickey asks: "but that the received when he took the book, Donny says as he looks out to Raph "Raph but that if you received and you do not feel anything when you took it for the first time and I never felt when I caught the Mickey does not answer anything and stays very serious for a few minutes looking at the book, after a moment the book opens abruptly, when opened in a page at random, is surprised by what he sees, and then answered seriously: "Donny this book is not just a book, all surprised concerned while paying attention to his brother, then don Mickey asks, "Why not just a simple book, Mickey?, Mickey shows you all the page I was looking at, while they all look the page of the book are surprised to see on that page was drawn a circle of transmutation and as he shows Mickey says seriously: "because this is a book of black magic ...
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Number of posts : 7905
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Warning Level :
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Favorite Turtle : It´s very hard to choose cause they all have different personalities. Leo because he cares about his family more than anything else. Raph because he´s not what he appears to be, he´s actually a nice person (or should I say turtle?). Don is the most sensitive and intelligent of the 4 and, who could forget about Mikey? I love him because he´s got a free spirit and can put everyone LOL, even in danger situations.
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Wow. Black Magic...Cool! Big grin
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Chapter 15: the memory behind the book

After a short time showing the symbol of the page that was showing his brothers, opened his eyes in token of amazement and then began to feel some twinges in the head, so strong that they did throw the book and hold on with both hands and kneel on the floor in pain, his brothers saw him in that state lost no time they went to help when approached Mickey, worried Donny asked putting his hands on his shoulders and said in a desperate tone: "Mickey you have?, are you okay?, now desperate Zamorra, Mickey answer me, Donny while he insisted that he answer, Mickey back of his mind were going through the same mental image of the book in his hands and drawing different types of symbols of black magic and using their hands to cast spells, a mental image itself was small, around about 5 years, trying to make an unsuccessful spell and a hand that appeared to be the Master Splinter head feels it cariñozamente, After recalling this, Mickey turns itself while it still desperately Zamorra Donny to do react, after a few moments, Mickey left without any expression on his face, Donny to see this well, hugs him tightly and tells him as he embraces relieved with almost tears in his eyes: "we do not scare so again in lying?, Mickey you stop hugging and says no expression"if not do it again, Raph surprised by the coldness of his expression says, hey that happens to you just now were with severe pain and care about you and so you thank?, Raph Mickey responds to chill with some "No is not complete is that ... Leo prayer and says," is that it?, Mickey is completing "is that I found something strange, Kazz curious question:" that thing oni-kun?, Mickey will says, "is that it makes a tube while those famous sights, but were rather rare, because ... intrigued Donny says," because that?, Mickey says, "because I see myself doing magic in this book, it says as he picks the book that he had shot, Donny confused adds: "Magic?, Leo and addresses the question:" Is it possible?, Donny replied: "Well if there are vampires and mutants like us because it magic?, but I believe in scientific facts in the books of black magic in the style of Harry Potter, Mickey adds seriously, "but what if everything I saw in my head was real?, Raph came he would say in a way ironic: "come on in your head Mickey spend many things as the thoughts that happen in your head like when you see the garbage that passes Mtv, Raph Leo exclaims to claim a sign:" Raph you who have against Mtv?, Raph replied: "I do not think it is just a channel that has a place in the TV, but only to convey reality show, Donny adds to their conversation:" what's Jackass?,Raph specifies: "Well transmit pure masochism, but they are a bunch of civilians who have nothing to do but hit, Mickey in turn discuss the book while browsing on MTV, Mickey to see the book in more detail will sit in a corner of the training area, while sitting, Kazz follows him and sits next to him, while Mickey is still reading the book, Kazz tells him to stop a one page where he saw something, Mickey asks, " Why would you want to see this page?, Kazz finger tells a drawing of Mickey cross worn around the neck, while or do you say, "that's why you wanted me to stop there, Mickey to see the drawing same cross on the neck is shocked and calls his other brothers to see what they had found Kazz, when everyone saw, Mickey begins to feel a burning in the chest, right in the place where the cross was when the heat begins to be more Intenza, the jewel that is in the middle of the cross begins abrillar Intenza a bright orange, to shine so Intenza worry and his brothers come to him for help, but the pain persisted and the brightness also, until Mickey grabs his cross and compressing it toward your chest, trying detubiera their pain, but the pain does not stop, all concerned are only looking at Mickey suffers because no one knows how to help, after a moment, feel a snap, as if I break something ceramic, while feeling that sound, Mickey is relieved of his pain, but to remove the hand of the chest, he realizes that what had rompido was his cross, to see broken, Mickey tells his brothers showed the pieces of his cross, and with a worried tone: "the broke, my cross, what separates me from being a beast, broke, brothers and Kazz only become paralyzed looking at his hand I had the pieces of his cross ...

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Oh no! Poor Mikey! What´s he going to do now? Update soon, please!
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Chapter 16: vampire without fangs is not
Mickey still on her knees on the floor with sad eyes and almost in tears lamenting: "not return to normal, I'll always be that all this fear, Donny says trying to comfort him as he touches his shoulder," come on Mickey, no so bad, at least you have an eternity to think about what type of vampire are you going to be Mickey picked up, almost relieved, along with his brother who did not release the shoulder, becoming fully erect two, Mickey suddenly embrace and says, "but if not I become what I want to be, being a mortal, because that's what I love most, Donny says," We all want that, but in our case this is impossible, Raph ridiculing adds: "or at least Kazz hit you in the mouth to throw you tusks, Kazz angry with a high tone says," just because I did it once does not mean I'm going to re-do, leaving to hug Mickey Donny exclaimed happily: "That's Raph've given me a good idea, sarcastic Raph says," and you have ideas?, distracted Mickey runs to the lab to Usme Donny out of its stuff, in his quest is a plier fine point, run to Kazz desperate, when he comes face to face with the girl, tells about being on top of Kazz "Kazz would you do me a favor?, Kazz with fear and intrigue exprecion replied:" amm, hi oni-sama, Mickey closer to her with pliers in hand says, "you'd be able to pull my teeth?Kazz with a confused expression only stays in the same place as his other brothers, who like herself were confused, mickey to look at the expression of Kazz of confuncion, Leo adds after a moment of stupefaction: "Mickey you can ask for favors such Kazz is only a girl, Kazz says something annoying: "I'm not a girl, crossing her arms and looking the other way, Donny says," so if you're not a girl how old are you?, Crouch says while his height is a bit shorter than him and pecking his forehead with his finger, Kazz, hurt one of his cheeks inflated with air and says while still on its hands: "I have ... now with a cheerful and lifting one of his index finger and a wink, age 16, knowing that all are in shock and after a few seconds all cry at the same time: 16? Raph is very close to her and tells her face to face: "how can you be 16 years?, Kazz proudly puts his two index fingers on his cheeks i said," because I look younger?, Raph moving away a bit to add something back blushing, "I thought you had some. ... .. I do not know, Mickey away from Kazz to pursue his original idea, Kazz excited to see him attend his head to agree with your idea, Mickey fits your head in the lap and opens Kazz Kazz mouth so that the plier teeth pulled when Kazz is about to do so,Kazz tells Mickey he was still with his mouth open: "Mickey where you say that I have to pull teeth?, Mickey with his mouth open and put some wires in his mouth so he would not close at all times just babble with the mouth open, Kazz asked not understanding he had said, but returns to babble, Donny to hear a second babbling Kazz gives instructions to his own mouth and his own fangs, Kazz indifferent Donny says sarcastically: "I'll wise, looking detalladmente Kazz Mickey's mouth says, "I do not see Mickey tusk have to take?, Mickey had wires spitting in the mouth for Kazz's lap and says," but I broke the string should have fangs ... Usme says while the mouth to find their tusks, unsuccessfully completes the sentence surprised here, Donny become worried and tells Mickey: Mickey are you okay?, Mickey paralyzed from the print begins to remember images that passed through his mind in the last chapter calm and not listen to anyone, after a moment he arises and says, "the book, surprised and confused Leo says," what?, Mickey runs to where he was still in thrown the book, but not found, mickey desperate wonder aloud: "Where is the book?, Kazz calm, says:" Here this and showing the book to the air, Mickey desperately worried and takes the book in a very aggressive and begins to leaf,when browsing, everybody comes into to view the content of the book in a fast, Leo worried confusing question: "Mickey can tell you're doing?, Mickey tells him would be like trying to ask a question:" Would you tell Leo deadly if you could drive you blink of an eye?, Leo replied confused, "well, do not know what to say, that Mickey?, Mickey tells him watching it and stopping at a page of the book" because in this book is abut a kind of spell that can become deadly to vampires, which apparently is not the trick of neck beads, all are surprised as they begin to see great detail page of the book that shows you ... Mickey

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note: the words "hi" says Kazz in a part of this chapter refers to the Japanese expression "hi" meaning "yes"
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This chapter was quite interesting! Nice!
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Chapter 17: reverting to what we were

Donny confused snatches the book to Mickey and says while he does "Mickey may not be possible, ie in another book said that only a vampire could again become mortal only with the help of an amulet that blocked her blood vampire or killing him, Mickey took the book to his brother says while browsing: "it is also true Don, Raph ironically says," and then say we can become life threatening?, Mickey takes the look of your book and tells Raph seriously "by the help of a spell, Leo asks in amazement:" Bewitched?, Mickey you're sure that would work?, confirms that nothing will come out 100% right, Kazz Mickey tells a little nervous, "who will be the addition that do?, Mickey responding while the sight of this for either side: "I do it, Donny said," you?, Mickey exclaims without expressing much emotion: "Yes, Donny insists:" your ?,... but your truth? , with signs of discomfort Mickey says, "I will do if Donny, Donny thought for a second and then asks again:" But you?, Raph throws change your theme to a place away from Donny and tells Mickey " Mickey you hardly know to recognize a mattress of a bed of nails, which is what gives you such confidence that you can, Donny returned the site where his brother would have launched earlier, adds, "and do it well?, when he says that Don, everyone starts to look at fixed Become responding calmly, "because I've done it before, Raph says," so as in your other life?,Mickey replied frowning: "No, but I did it before, now change your theme, well I will be replicating all night as I do the spell or will it take?, Donny look at Leo and Raph as telling "and do you think?", after a thoughtful moment, he says, "well we can lose?, Mickey looks dicemientras encouraged him and gather his manosy eyes with small drops of tears of emotion:" Leo really confident that I can do this right?, Leo with a warm smile replied: "Of course if you confirm that Mickey can do it then you can do well, Mickey hugs to hear this with an expression on her face that it is equal to - ^. ^ -, Raph decicion desepcionado with Leo sighs and hits his face with the palm of your hand while out of the arrededores Donny said, "will keep dialing the number of the ambulance, after a while, Mickey begins spilling a white powder on floor in the shape of a circle where his brothers, who are beginning adetectar a bad smell in the air, Donny Coughing exclaims: "Mickey is that smell?, Raph bends down to smell the dust White and tells Donny: "is this thing, garlic salt, Mickey says," do not complain that smell is part of the dust cleaner witchcraft, Donny says: "I believed that the salt was dust purifier Mickey says something disturbing: "If you want to do this with salt witchcraft I have no problem with you out of my witchcraft, Raph whispers to Donny," at least you save the trip to the hospital, Mickey exclaims, "I heard you,Leo says, "Mickey haras whether or not the magic that?, Mickey corrects him:" Leo witchcraft, sorcery, magic is made otherwise, Leo says, "Well now, just do it!, Mickey tells him:" ok, worried Kazz says: "you are sure you do oni-sama, Mickey confirms:" Of course little sister chan, Raph boring exclaims: "Mickey if I keep hoping I will root, Donny says," Do not be impatient Raph insurance ... before completing the sentence, the circle of white powder, an orange glow emanates, and a strong breeze, which could be likened to a gale, between that, Mickey was launching a sort of reddish water contained in a glass , adding that, the orange glow became more Intenza, then dyed in white, after a few minutes, his brothers remained lying on the floor, like Mickey, but Kazz was the only conscious at that time was to see if his brothers were doing well, when I woke Leo began to feel dizzy while rubbing his head and said plaintively: "I think that spell I fell ill, after saying that his brothers began waking up, waking Raph told Donny in amazement: "Donny your skin tone is more asentuado, Donny replied:" seriously?, and I tell you, your skin tone also changed, Raph shook his head said, "Donny you could show your fangs? , just out of curiosity, Donny opened his mouth to get their fangs, but Raph sees nothing, after a few minutes Leo exclaims: "guys, the spell worked, Raph says," that you are sure that it works, Leo says, "because I have no teeth, with this only on the ground are only INCAD facing each other ...

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*gasps* Hurray! They´re back to 'normal' again! Wonderful!
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Chapter 18: we're back

The three brothers who were still looking at his body for schools to make sure that he had worked to perfection, Leo Printerfriendly just ran to the bathroom and his brothers followed him, being the three in front of the mirror they saw themselves, so was his satisfaction that strong Leo exclaimed: "It works!, really works!, now looking to his brothers, Donny Raph, are normal, Donny was so excited that leaves the bath running with Raph saying I can not believe the magic works , Raph just add: "if you know but the funny thing is that it was Mickey who made this possible, it is incredible that he has proved something good in your life, donny adding to their conversation:" whether to give the greatest possible credit, when they reach the place where he had begun his return, see Mickey lying on the floor in the legs of Kazz, seeing him in that state then asked Donny to Kazz worried: "What happened?, Kazz replied sadly:" this well since you became mortal, has been unconscious almost motionless, Raph suggests: "It's better than lying on the sofa, Raph and Donny are going to lay on the couch while Leo takes off his clothes vampire returns to his "suit" ninja exclaims after doing so while leaving your room: "Mickey impresses I must admit I never thought that I handled in sorcery, when he realizes that everyone is on the sofa with his Mickey smile of satisfaction changed to an expression of concern and will hurry to the couch where Mickey was lying when he comes to be present along all question "that happened?, Donny tries to answer, but the Master Splinter answer your question before him says with an air of concern, "much of their energy use to do in life spell,Donny surprised just says, "what?, That means that this weakened?, Master Splinter without speaking only assists with the head, moreover Leo asks her Sensei," but there is a way to recover fully? The Master Splinter just says, "only time will tell, the last time you had this kind of spell the person who is also conducted in a critical state of health, Donny confused again:" last?, or whether this type of sorcery has been done before?, Master Splinter only answers: "yes, but that person had already been handled earlier with black magic and was all an expert, Raph question" and that person could not tell us the trick help her get better?, so we could utilzarlo in Mickey, raising his voice in Splinter disapprove says "no, only people more familiar with witchcraft and black magic can do, otherwise if someone alien to it is involved may to lose their lives, Kazz approaching Mickey and by touching the front says: "then we should let Mickey get it resolved on its own, after saying this, feel that Mickey is moving, when said moving slowly while trying to open their eyes: "Kazz seriously think I can manage alone?, Kazz awake when he sees his eyes are watery, but cries and says with a smile on his face:" akiraka oni-sama, on hearing this so sweetly, Mickey gets up and sits on the sofa while the others would change their dress as a vampire and change it for his "dress" habitual,while Raph and Donny change of clothing, Kazz Master Splinter and Leo are in the same place asking a few questions to Master Splinter, Mickey began asking: "Master Splinter you knew what would happen if me into the spell anyway? the Master Splinter said only: "Yes, because I saw how to do this kind of spell before, Leo asks," and who was the one who did it?, Master Splinter says only: "It was a very close to us, and very close to you, Michelangelo, Mickey confused again: "to me?, Master Splinter only assists with the head until Raph and Donny interrupt the conversation, Raph and Donny just sit on the sofa next to Mickey, sitting alone Raph agregamientras fits "that longest night, we found this book, we discover things about it, Donny says:" Mickey has a decisive in this rosary, made sorcery, we exit to what we were before, and now what is next?, The Master Splinter says very seriously as he retires to his room, "many other things ... many more ....

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note: in a part of this chapter Kazz says: akiraka, which is a Japanese expression meaning "course"
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Wow....I need to know more! Will Mike be okay? Who was the one that Splinter was talking about! I want to know!!
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Chapter 19: The beast is unleashed

In the rooftops of New York a full moon night, four silhouettes are jumping from rooftop to rooftop with great skill, they are our four players who were on their guard tour, screaming spirits and with an air of fun, after a few Abansa roofs, stop at the roof of a building to rest, panting the four mutant turtles stay there, while trying to catch his breath Mickey says, "know I missed doing this every night, Donny says," yes, jump building if it brings nostalgia, Leo says with an air of nostalgia: "the good thing is that we got back, we need no longer be slaves to the blood and fangs, in the end we are who we are, ironically tells Raph" if Leo, in the end we became the monster that inhabit the sewers, Donny tells severely Raph "Raph not be so, I'd rather be this to be a murderer, Raph approaches Donny frowning face and tells on angrily, "we were not murderers, we were creatures of the night to survive not only kill for pleasure, Donny replied with desert air of discontent:" For me to kill for fun or necessity as a murder, like we killed with just getting a little human blood, Raph says laughing in a slightly husky "but I feel like that flavor or not?, Leo replied:" what, Raph complete with a sinister voice while holding his arm in the Donny's shoulder, "just remember the exquisite feeling of this scarlet nectar in your vocation again, Do not remember Donny?, Donny withdrawing his arm from his shoulder he said frowning, "if I remember, but I prefer to forget, now with a sad, just remember that I was a murderer because my instinct was telling me makes me feel guilty about many things, Mickey encouraged him "well we're going to do, just continue with the course of our quiet and pacifist lives, after saying that they feel are below where they hear a sound, were the dragons purple and Hun, who were robbing a store of illegal weapons, when they see stealing Raph says: "finally something to get even, after that it jumps from the roof down, Leo tries to stop him, but it was useless, after which was, his brothers began to climb down a fire escape, as they descended Donny added ironically: "And where is our quiet life Mickey?, Mickey replied quickly and with an expression on his face as ¬ ¬:" Shut up, down and Hun Purple dragons, were discussing how to divide the profits, until it stops Raph punched in the face that launched away from the place where he was, when you throw away the purple dragons begin to shoot, while Essequibo bullets, knocking out all enemies, except Hun who was recovering from the blow he had given Raph, when Hun woke up, saw three of the four turtles get close, while Raph acted like crazy hitting the purple dragon who was close by,while grabbing a purple dragon's neck with the intention of killing him was telling a sinister tone as if he were a murderer, with a look of anger, yet with a sinister smile, "people like you, who follow orders clumsy as a Hun, what they deserve is to eliminate them, now one of her sais puna, about to attack with her, Leo appears to stop behind in the struggle, Raph releases the purple dragon, but it makes a small Leo wound on her cheek with her sai, and then throw it away, Donny for his part will be next to Leo to see if this well, but that Raph starts to kill all the purple dragons that were in its path, between that, Mickey begins to feel a chill while watching Raph killing not only with his sais, but also with their own hands when it finishes is covered with blood all over his body, and slides his tongue over his fingers taste the blood that got all their slaughter, then do the same with his sais and laughs in a very macabracon an expression on his face as anger, while his Bros only observe, after a few moments to have that expression in his face changed to an expression as of Confucianism, his knees began to shiver, and after standing a few moments, she faints in front of his brothers, who immediately turn to help ...

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Tsukino! Sorry I took so long to read this (I blame school T_T)! Lovely chapter, keep going
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Do not worry about me I can not write very often by the school: 3 (¬ ¬ brain squeeze us)

Chapter 20: a surprise appearance

Raph is lying in a pool of blood in a very dark place, Raph to wake up and be in a place so dark looks around, looking for a familiar face, but only found the bodies of their brothers lying on the floor wounds such as a knife and bloody bodies, is surprised to see this, then head in his hands are shaking, bloody, after seeing this, it wakes up from bad dream, because Mickey had thrown a glass water to the face, Mickey was beside Kazz, sitting on his knees on the floor beside the sofa where it was Raph, Mickey tells air Kazz winner: "Once, I told you that water would result, I you need three tickets, Raph confused asks: "What happened?, while holding his head back to the room Donny says while sontiene a book in their hands," and woke up our favorite psychopath, confused and Raph says rubbing his eyes: " you're talking about?, Leo and Master Splinter entering the room, and Leo says: "I saw, being part of one of the largest massacres seen by us, Kazz asked confused," but as might be capable of such acts now almost inconvencida what Leo said, Raph-shin is not capable of making something as hatred like that, to hear this, Raph's hands begin to tremble, tremble and start watching your hands until it covers the face with them and begins to remember images in her head were killing dragons and purple, and tasted their blood,static after a few moments telling Kazz's voice several times, "Raph truth?, it does react, and after a moment while we contestaa Kazz a voice in no mood to answer:" No, it's true what Leo said, Kazz surprised looks just like this sitting, and complete what he was saying: "I really kill them, to each of them, now with trembling lips and cubirendo with your hand so it would look less obvious," and enjoy your blood Kazz says surprised: "How could you do such a thing?, Donny says as she closes the book:" In none of the books that bring me reach my personal library in our old home tells us something about what happened Last night, Master Splinter says while installing Raph next sat now: "what happened, you can not explain or in books, or scientific facts Donnatello now Raph by touching the shoulder, are things that anger experimenting with the passage of time, somewhat domineering Raph asked, "referred to" the ire experimenting with the passage of time "refers to what happened outside was a natural nurse?, Master Splinter responds to a simple yes, but Leo inconfor asked me: "But sensei, such as natural an act as atros as it is more or less kill 25 people in one night?, an excuse not here wise as something natural in Raph Mickey adds: "yeah, sensei, for one kill just because he was born in the heart does not mean it is prudent to do that infringes on the beginning and end of copyright,Mickey asks Donny missed exclaiming: "What has that to do what we are clarifying cone?, Mickey says with a shrug:" I have no idea but it sounds good no?, Leo punch in the face with the palm of your hand adds: " ah .. give me strength, Raph adds a little depressed, "I do not understand yet is that I did," that is, I have a grudge against the Purple Dragons and Hungary, but not to kill them, saying that after listening from the distance a voice with a German accent while some English which reads in a very profound: "Maybe I can explain, suddenly when everyone hears this voice rising from the place where they were and see that the entrance was a being who looked exactly like the Master Splinter but with the exception that he was dressed in elegant clothes and Victorian qye consisted of a black hat with a bat motif on the side of red, a soft white shirt with the part of the breast, a black-blaise taxes under a coat with high collar and so long that reached his ankles, black and inside it was blood red,wore black cloth pants, and black with a buckle Mocaccino, wore black leather gloves and carrying a walking stick their hands with silver figure of a cobra, with a couple of Rubys as eyes, when you see Master Splinter gets Paralis of posters while others just watch it ...

end of the second season

Note: in some Kazz says Raph-shin, change the suffix "kun" which is a Japanese suffix that gives young men the same age by the suffix "shin" in Japanese means "red", or Kazz meant, "Raph Red ^ ^ Raph
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Thanks for all the explanations! They´re really helpful! And this last chapter was brilliantly brilliant!
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Starting the new season: I think it should be called "vampire Parody", should be called "dark stories, vampires, but good because I put so and I can not change, the title of this season is" TMNT, the occult blood ".

Chapter 1: Talk

After being stunned for a moment with his visitor, Splinter cried in front of everyone: Vladimir!, Are you doing here?, All at the same time they look puzzled and say in unison: "Vladimir?, Mutant rat well dressed, Loading in progress on his cane silver cobra-shaped ruby eyes iroico saying in a tone almost mocking English accent and deep voice, almost a "long time no see, ever, I thought to find in such a pleasant place to place, as he says this he extends his arms while holding his cane, Spinto little nervous just lay beside the sofa and static standing, confused Mickey emieza asking: "a. .. Master Splinter, who is?, Master Splinter nervous just babble and after a few moments of stuttering, clearly responds to the visitor looking first and then to their children: "Well ... you ... must know that his name Vladimir ... and my ..., the visitor moves to Master Splinter in place to have more intimacy with the sea and very attentive girl who heard of his English accent, "are his brother,all this information again been shocked and confused after a few seconds, Leo has the courage to speak out and say, "but, as you are his brother?, pointing with a finger, with an air of weary Vladimir sits the sofa next to Raph you look closely, when Vladimir realizes that Raph watched him turn his eyes to it, and gives a slight smile, then turns his head forward to where it meets Splinter, Mickey, Donny Leo and Kazz that were on the floor at the foot of the sofa, very Antentas to expect an explanation, while Leo fit, vladimir tells: "Well, say we will or not?, Vladimir says with a smile and ironic tone replied: "Sure, now turning his eyes to Splinter, which stood as long as there is no objection, Splinter truth?, Splinter sad says:" Later, he said to him, he says very vladimir Master Splinter seriously: "are you sure?, master Splinter just lowers his head and begins to talk it Vladimir:" Well, let's start to introduce, he rose from his seat and said very formally susu wearing one of his hands to his chest, hello my name is Vladimir, Mickey says, waving as a greeting: "Hello Vladimir, after that Donny hits him in the neck can continue to Vladimir, Vladimir back down and start talking," Well, as I said before I am the brother of the rat that is, something enojado Master Splinter says "stepbrother , Vladimir continued," Well stepbrother,our separate ways when we were, is something thoughtful, like say ... normal, he was with his beloved Master and I naturally migrate to another ship to Romania, Leo interrupts: "But as we had not talked to you before?, Vladimir procegue "well Splinter considers me as a bad thing that exists in our extensive family tree, so tubiera did not want much contact with you, Donny is now interrupting:" referred to is considered somewhat bad, Vladimir putting a disturbing stare and says it would be an ominous tone: "very soon find out, now with a sonrsa on his face, good passing to another subject I have heard around that Raph has felt something strange, Raph bending the light says, "If even I feel is ..., is thoughtful and then looks up confused and asks," wait a moment as you know my name if I have not even submitted?, Vladimir looks at him with a smile Thin on his face and said sweetly, "but I think you can forget the name of my own son?, to hear that Splinter is surprised as everyone in the room, except that we only Vladimir stares at a Splinter face grim satisfaction at the same time ...

continue

note: in the next chapters is likely to be longer than in previous seasons, I think I get my moment of inspiration continues ^ ^ Nerd


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I love the new title! It really fits in this story! And this text was even greater than usual! excellent work! and hurray for the mine workers from Chile!
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Chapter 2: clarifications

after a few moments of inaccuracies Raph gets up from his seat and starts laughing alone, after a few moments of laughter became something serious voice said, "I know I'm not your son, staring at Vladimir I am the son of that person, now telling the Master Splinter was away, then starts Raph starts to breathe deeply mourn as if to avoid all this must be a bad joke, after saying that the Master Splinter comes on, you making the shoulder and said sadly: "I also I would love to be a bad joke, but it's true, Donny trying to figure all this is lifted and full while the others will rise from their places," wait a minute, you do not may be the father of Raph, indicating Vladimir was still on the sofa in his staff Loading cobra, Vladimir smiled ironically tells missed something, "well, now get up and remains in front of Donatello, and why you think should not be your father?, looking in a fixed Donn frowning, Donny trying to answer is almost paralyzed by the fear with some babbling the first word of his answer, after a few seconds, her courage and complete the sentence: "because, first of all by nature the parents of a newborn turtle disappear when disobedient, second in my opinion has never been done by Raph and I remember that is not worthy of being called his" father " and third place if his father is not nothing like your child?, Eh ... eh ..?,Donny placing his hands on his back looks indifferent from head to toe and says in the same indifferent tone: "no more questions, now standing next to his brothers and Kazz with a triumphant air, his brothers congratulate him for his brilliant arguments but then l Omir Vladimir angry, but then in a grim smile, as if trying to be scary and then says: "I must say that your arguments are as smart as your honorable mother, saying this makes a bow to Don, the hear some of his mother Donny is a little confused, but still listened to their arguments, but I must say that my son Raphael is blood and not as you are adopted, Kazz tells Vladimir furious with a determined voice: "So show him try it on us and that really is his father, Mickey miprecionado cries while watching "Kazz?, Leo whispers to Donnie:" that courage to be a girl meters measured only forty-nine, Donny replied: " girls with this character is once every 400 years, impressed Vladimir lifts the face with one of his hands and his face close to her eyes and tell a deeper tone of his voice: "I am not surprised my son tried to feed you, your blood is privileged in many ways, angry Raph hits raised his hand and says Kazz face as if trying to protect Kazz in an embrace: "If you can talk it out until then hurt anyone, least of my little sister, Vladimirseriously at first see the face of Raph something angry, after staring at him as he frowned, his expression changed to a more friendly and Levey with a smile saying: "okay, if you want us to talk to out this well preserved, Raph heard it loose its protective embrace Kazz and removed by the Victorian English rata to the exit of the den, Mickey to see them leave and says out loud in a worried tone: "that's what talk?, Leo replied: "I do not know, but if he is really the father of Raph, Raph then who is, or how it relates to us?, Donny adds to the questions:" I have no idea what I read, but something is not I have clear, Mickey looks at him and says "that thing donny?, Donny replied:" when he was named somewhere defending our "honorable mother" that he meant?, Leo says, "I do not know but surely all know 2 people this, Mr. Vladimir and Master Splinter, to hear that Splinter tells his children, "and are things that will soon come to light ...

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oh...the suspense! I always end your chapter with a question mark! I love it!
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